Treasure

a glint of sapphire eyes
	behind a veil …
the tulle has yellowed,
	gems sparkle still.
	

November 10, 2022
Bitesize Poem No. 55 Poetry Contest
Line Gauthier, sponsor

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Christuraj Alex

November 29, 2022 at 4:38 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

David Bose

November 29, 2022 at 4:57 AM

Thanks, Chris. My wife deserves the credit for inspiring this.

Beata Agustin

November 28, 2022 at 7:55 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

David Bose

November 29, 2022 at 4:56 AM

Thank you ... people say I need all the blessings God can spare. Truly, I appreciate your nice comment, Beata. Thanks.

Linda Alice Fowler

November 28, 2022 at 2:49 PM

ahh...sweet write David. Congratulations on your win! :)

David Bose

November 29, 2022 at 4:54 AM

I'm not usually associated with "sweet", so thank you! (I'll attribute sweetness to my wife.) Many thanks, Linda.

Line Gauthier

November 28, 2022 at 1:01 PM

beautiful imagery ~

David Bose

November 29, 2022 at 4:52 AM

Thank you, Line, especially for sponsoring contests. I love that you promote and write "bitesize" poems. Thanks! Dave

Brandy Nicole

November 11, 2022 at 5:04 PM

You've painted such a beautiful picture with your words. Yes, eyes of Sapphire are a simple, yet breathtaking treasure to behold. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

David Bose

November 29, 2022 at 4:59 AM

Well, thank you Brandy. Your specific comments bolster me. But credit for the beautiful picture belong to my wife! Thank you. Dave

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