Treasure

a glint of sapphire eyes behind a veil … the tulle has yellowed, gems sparkle still. November 10, 2022 Bitesize Poem No. 55 Poetry Contest Line Gauthier, sponsor

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/29/2022 4:38:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

David Bose
Date: 11/29/2022 4:57:00 AM

Thanks, Chris. My wife deserves the credit for inspiring this.

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/28/2022 7:55:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

David Bose
Date: 11/29/2022 4:56:00 AM

Thank you ... people say I need all the blessings God can spare. Truly, I appreciate your nice comment, Beata. Thanks.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/28/2022 2:49:00 PM

ahh...sweet write David. Congratulations on your win! :)

David Bose
Date: 11/29/2022 4:54:00 AM

I'm not usually associated with "sweet", so thank you! (I'll attribute sweetness to my wife.) Many thanks, Linda.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/28/2022 1:01:00 PM

beautiful imagery ~

David Bose
Date: 11/29/2022 4:52:00 AM

Thank you, Line, especially for sponsoring contests. I love that you promote and write "bitesize" poems. Thanks! Dave

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/11/2022 5:04:00 PM

You've painted such a beautiful picture with your words. Yes, eyes of Sapphire are a simple, yet breathtaking treasure to behold. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

David Bose
Date: 11/29/2022 4:59:00 AM

Well, thank you Brandy. Your specific comments bolster me. But credit for the beautiful picture belong to my wife! Thank you. Dave