Treasure

I noticed her two weeks ago.
She flew into my physics lab 
like hell itself was after her
and tripped as she sat down.

She's always late for classes,
stammering her apologies,
flustered and myopic, her glasses 
barely perched upon her nose.

Accident-prone, she barreled
through the library like Grant 
attacking Richmond, giggling nervously 
as she checked out her books.

To me she is a treasure, a whirling 
dervish dressed in black and white,
always black and white, like for her
it's some particular religion.

I asked her to the movies. She acted 
like I was the first who'd ever taken 
interest, she was flattered but she 
flatly and decidedly said no.

She had thrown down the gauntlet,
so I set out to woo her with my wit
and charm, taking every opportunity
to bump into her when and where I could.

Finally she acquiesced, and when 
she slowed down enough to smile
and chat and laugh and joke with me
my heart was hers to keep!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bowen Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Sweet read. Kind and gentle and full of strong story telling imagery~ GREAT FLOW and ending. Nice wrk my friend. Just Lovely fun writing...story telling magic!
T. Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 3:57 PM
Wow! This is brilliant. Poetry that can touch my heart and tickle it at the same time is really special to me. The raw enlightened innocence you so clearly portray is touching. :D I love this poem. And I'd also like to kindly thank you for your generous words. Ema
Devonshire Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 9:13 AM
Oh, Keith, as a teacher I can relate! Love the image "like Grant attacking Richmond." Wonderfully witty poem! Love, Carolyn
P. Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 11:17 PM
loved the last few stanzas... a very precious treasure!! lovely write! ~ Arany
 Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 4:27 PM
Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. Thankfully, there are still people that look beyond the exterior to see the inner soul. Enjoyed this uplifting poem. Karen
Omaidin Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Super, I love it, such a happy picture, great stuff, hope to God she passes those physics papers in the summer!
Winter Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 12:46 PM
She sounds absolutely precious! This was like a scene from a movie flashing before my eyes. Love happy endings. Well done - in many ways! Love, Shar
Gorelick Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Yes.! This puts the reader right in the conquest with you. I just love it. BG
Higgins Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 11:42 AM
This is so sweet Keith.. you painted this so well.. The voice in the piece really lets the reader in and introduce this woman perfectly. Very good piece.
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