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Treasure

Treasure

the open locket falls as her last breath whispers his name one more time



4.6.2021 ©deborah burch

Monoku

Copyright © Deborah Burch | Year Posted 2021

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Anitha Jayasankar

April 12, 2021 at 8:05 AM

So beautiful Deborah..loved this.... Congrats on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

April 13, 2021 at 11:49 AM

Thank you Ani!! For your thoughtful kindness and visit!! Big huggs! Deb

Constance La France

April 9, 2021 at 7:39 AM

Deborah, congratulations on your win with my writing prompt Cherish and creating this beautiful Monoku, it took my breath away, well done, love _Constance

April 9, 2021 at 8:35 AM

Thank you so very much Constance!! Big hugs and much love. Deb

April 9, 2021 at 1:14 AM

Wow.....So intense....loved it....Congrats on your win :)

April 9, 2021 at 1:14 AM

Wow.....So intense....loved it....Congrats on your win :)

April 9, 2021 at 8:36 AM

Thank you Carol!!

April 8, 2021 at 3:25 PM

A very profound verse, Beborah, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

April 8, 2021 at 7:32 PM

Thanks so much Eve!!! Big huggs!!! Deb

April 8, 2021 at 8:54 AM

Hi Deborah, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

April 8, 2021 at 1:48 PM

Thanks Alexis!!! Hope your day is blessed as well! Big huggs!! Deb

April 7, 2021 at 8:49 PM

WoW! Deborah, You have penned such a heartfelt one-liner. I found it to be powerful as well.Best wishes in the contest:-)Alexis

April 7, 2021 at 8:56 PM

Thank you Alexis!! I’m so grateful for the encouragement!! Big huggs! Deb

April 7, 2021 at 8:30 PM

I agree with what Andrea and Caren have stated below.

April 7, 2021 at 8:33 PM

Thank you Robert!! Big huggs! Deb

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2021 at 3:44 PM

so poignant. Wow!

April 7, 2021 at 8:33 PM

The ?? Was an emoticon!! Lol

April 7, 2021 at 8:32 PM

Thanks Andy!!??

Caren Krutsinger

April 6, 2021 at 9:37 PM

such a well thought out and cleverly executed monoku. Good luck in Constance's contest!

April 6, 2021 at 9:40 PM

Thank Caren!! Big huggs!! Deb

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