Treasure

Treasure the open locket falls as her last breath whispers his name one more time 4.6.2021 ©deborah burch Monoku

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/12/2021 8:05:00 AM

So beautiful Deborah..loved this.... Congrats on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2021 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Ani!! For your thoughtful kindness and visit!! Big huggs! Deb

Constance La France

Date: 4/9/2021 7:39:00 AM

Deborah, congratulations on your win with my writing prompt Cherish and creating this beautiful Monoku, it took my breath away, well done, love _Constance

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/9/2021 8:35:00 AM

Thank you so very much Constance!! Big hugs and much love. Deb

Carol Mitra

Date: 4/9/2021 1:14:00 AM

Wow.....So intense....loved it....Congrats on your win :)

Carol Mitra

Date: 4/9/2021 1:14:00 AM

Wow.....So intense....loved it....Congrats on your win :)

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/9/2021 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Carol!!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2021 3:25:00 PM

A very profound verse, Beborah, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/8/2021 7:32:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve!!! Big huggs!!! Deb

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/8/2021 8:54:00 AM

Hi Deborah, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/8/2021 1:48:00 PM

Thanks Alexis!!! Hope your day is blessed as well! Big huggs!! Deb

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/7/2021 8:49:00 PM

WoW! Deborah, You have penned such a heartfelt one-liner. I found it to be powerful as well.Best wishes in the contest:-)Alexis

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/7/2021 8:56:00 PM

Thank you Alexis!! I’m so grateful for the encouragement!! Big huggs! Deb

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/7/2021 8:30:00 PM

I agree with what Andrea and Caren have stated below.

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/7/2021 8:33:00 PM

Thank you Robert!! Big huggs! Deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2021 3:44:00 PM

so poignant. Wow!

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/7/2021 8:33:00 PM

The ?? Was an emoticon!! Lol

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/7/2021 8:32:00 PM

Thanks Andy!!??

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/6/2021 9:37:00 PM

such a well thought out and cleverly executed monoku. Good luck in Constance's contest!

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/6/2021 9:40:00 PM

Thank Caren!! Big huggs!! Deb