Travelling Light

Whispers of a love lost 
under the harvest moon-
I’m TRAVELLING LIGHT, 
for my life was vanished.

Baggage too  h e a v y  with 
belongings of blame, 
chest full of memories-
stuffed with anguish and self-pity.
I’ve was caught in between 
the light and darkness, 
suffering in the shadows, 
w i t h o u t  a face,
a name spoken in a 
different language.

There were days of yore 
full of  j a d e d  cargo,
letting go seemed
so hard to do- 
too hard to ignore. 
When the torment arrived, 
I saw with no eyes,
veiled by a shield of pain, 
a disguise can’t reveal. 
Fastly I  l i n g e r e d, 
yet oblivion made me 
wonder slow-
Covered in lies, trapped in a 
life...
-without meaning.

TRAVELLING LIGHT seems to 
bring sincere alleviation, 
I was stuck in the lost and found, 
          n o   w a y   o u t-

When I said I couldn’t make it, 
I tried harder than before-
I could not ask for more joy;
h a p p i n e s s  has prevailed. 
I feel a loving sensation encompassed
in the depths of my soul-
Forgiveness has been granted,
b e s t o w e d  by dignity. 
I opened a new door of confidence, 
a pathway to freedom. 

I was blinded by the immense luggage,
wounded from lifting without strength-
So, I’ve been  s l o w l y  unpacking… 
for I am TRAVELLING LIGHT.


Travelling Light Poetry Contest
September 27, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Neumann Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations Laura and thanking for entering my contest. I also travel a lot lighter now than I used to. Your poem speaks to me. Many wishes, Kai
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Congrats on your win, luloo.
Ashley Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Wow such a deep, emotive and evocative write Laura with amazing poetic expression. Enjoyed. Congratulations on your win!
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:24 PM
Love the metaphor here and the creative word-play - nicely done, and a well-deserved win, Laura - congrats! :-) <3
Roper Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Beautifully done, laura , congratulations on your win. Miss your visits :( Hugs Eve ~`*
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