Traveling Light

I am a photon
a tiny bundle of energy.
My brothers and I
oscillate in synchronized breath;
as a wave, 
we hurtle
through black  voids,
three hundred thousand kilometers
each second,
a dizzying ride.

Four years ago,
we were flung 
from the fire of a star.
A long journey,
but not a lonely one,
for there are many of us.

We are nearing
a beautiful planet
where green continents swim 
in blue oceans.
I hope we arrive
in deep darkness
when their star
is on the other side.

Perhaps one of their beings,
gazing at the sky,
receives us.
We will slow down
as we travel
through the gelatinous matter
of her eye
and die 
on her retina.
I will no longer be,
but her miraculous brain
will decode our message:
there was a star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 11:01 PM
A FAVE for me. Amazing journey, Agnes.
Neumann Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:40 AM
I really like your take on the theme and the way you put it forward. Congratulations and thank you for taking part in my contest. Many wishes, Kai
Krampe Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Thank you for my placement, Kai - I am glad you liked my poem.
Ashley Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 8:44 AM
A fantastic and fanciful write Agnes. well-written and expressive. Congratulations on your win!
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:26 PM
Wonderful and fascinating write, Agnes - I also chose to write about a photon! Nicely done, and congrats on your win! :-)
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Thanks, Gregory. I just went to check out your write - nicely done.
Roper Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Wonderful creative write, Agnes, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Rigoler Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:16 PM
I enjoy poems written about science. I have one also about the photon. Thanks for stopping by to read me, Agnes. / M
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Very belated thanks, Maurice - just saw your comment.
Duet Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 1:23 PM
What a strange and wonderful poem, Agnes! Love it. And, congrats on your win. I can see why.
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Thanks, Carole - sorry for the lateness, just seeing this now.
Canerdy Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 10:16 AM
Wow! This is SO creative, Agnes! Congrats on your well-deserved win. The quality of this poem is the reason I keep seeing your name on winners' lists! Janice
Krampe Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 11:35 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comment.
May Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 7:57 PM
I like the beautiful journey of the photon..Nicely penned Agnes
Vinson Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 11:06 PM
Love it, Agnes, and perfect ending. : ) And hey - on the Centaurians - I work with at least a couple of those dudes.
Coreggia Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Agnes, what a penetrating poem; you have us travel at the speed of light, and, as we are about to enter earth's atmosphere you bring us back down in the most gentle blink of an eye ever written as the earthling is about to see the light:) An enthusiastic 7 Amitiés
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 12:36 AM
I agree with Arthur. This is brilliant (sadly when they get here, our planet may have disappeared by then)
Krampe Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I have them come from the star that is nearest to Earth (other than our Sun), four light years away (which is why it says "four years ago" in the second stanza), so they'll be seen by humans for a while :)
Vaso Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:40 PM
Agnes, this was well brilliant!
Krampe Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Thanks, Arthur.
Ricci Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Hello Agnes. You took us readers on a journey. You have captured and met the speed of light concept. The mighty Free Verse was a well chosen format to express your entry. The ending sentence was marvelous with thought. Good luck with the contest. Well done throughout.
Krampe Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Lisa.
Green Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Wow, all the way around this poem is spectacular and that ending is a wow moment for me. Good luck in the contest.
Krampe Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Thank you, Chris.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 8:06 AM
This poem shines with creative light Agnes. I was spellbound! Excellent! 7 ; )
Krampe Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Thank you, Connie.
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April 10, 2017 at 3:59 AM
this should do very well in that contest, because it is an interesting one for sure...i particularly like the closure in that final stanza...i'm sorry you did not get chance to enter my contest, because i like your writing a lot; they do tend to fill up very quickly! i stipulate new poems only as a way of trying to slow down entries, but it still filled in under 48 hours! i am like you in that i need time to work on a poem
Krampe Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Thank you for your visit and your kind comments, Charlotte.
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