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Traveling In the Small Hours

I watch as stillness spread over me And now the crickets speak For during the daylight they are concealed and meek Earths soil must rest and cool The moon beams like a fool Night has transpired And concealed day light that has expired So now the eyes shall roam the forest From the farthest of west to east Alluring the minds apprehensions and testing its bravery Of what may come to seek in the dark that may be unsavory Rattling of leaves And quiet distant, approach the evening thieves And my breathe is shallow and still As I walk slowly and mill The day’s events do echo through the woodland As though a friend had thoughts and my hand Guiding me, hiding me from my deepest intellect And my head won’t draw a closing and deselect Till I clear my senses and rest for sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/14/2008 9:44:00 AM
Hello Laura Living in Alaska and having the forest in my own backyard I know the feeling quite well of walking these paths. This is written with heartfelt insight that gives one pause to think. I can't wait to read your new book, I know it will be a great one! Good luck with it hun, you deserve it for you've earned it! I'll be sending good thoughts your way. Congrats again! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/14/2008 6:14:00 AM
I don't often walk any country routes at night, but this does remind me of many moonlit nights I walked my summers at the beach. A very beautiful write. I can feel and sense the night with its mysteries, and your solitude and reflection as you walk. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/14/2008 4:00:00 AM
Laura - Sometimes I walk down the tributary that backs our property just to clear my head - Great poem - God Bless you Laura
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Date: 8/13/2008 7:22:00 PM
I have often walked late in the evening, in our rural country area, and you have described the feeling of that experience beautifully. It is such a peaceful, serene place to clear ones thoughts. Lovely Poem here! Fondly, Carrie
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