Traveling

Traveling can be a pain,
Particularly on a plane. 
You plan, you pack, you park, you wait
Until you find the proper gate.

You clutch ID and boarding pass
Then zigzag through the lines en masse,
Removing coats and belts and shoes
And pray you're not the one they choose...

A "random" check - you're patted down
By someone surly, with a frown
That's meant to let you know she's pissed
'Cause you might be a terrorist.

You make it through and grab your stuff
And find a seat. There aren't enough
So some folks stand 'til they announce
The boarding call; all flyers pounce.

The goal's to make it so your case
Will squeeze into a vacant space
And then you sit, your legs all squished -
Not quite as stress-free as you'd wished.

And yet - some time away awaits,
Well-worth whatever aggravates.
A change of scene, some treats to find
And all the humdrum left behind.

This little break is like a gift;
Your spirits get a needed lift.
The days will pass, the time will fly
And soon again, you'll surf the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/4/2016 7:35:00 AM
Used to be "running the gauntlet." Now we waddle in our stocking feet while holding up our waist bands sans belt...what fun! Another excellent description from the master story teller! Cheerlets and Chuckles ~ john
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Date: 12/3/2016 7:11:00 PM
No thanks Mrs Ilene. I'll drive:) Love the poem:)
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Date: 12/3/2016 6:02:00 PM
AND we pay good money for airport stress, but you are right; the right destination is an ideal payoff. I enjoyed this, Ilene, and lived it along with each stanza. The 'liquid' thing / amount was a big stresser for me at one time! I love vent writes, especially when they soar to a positive landing position! CayCay
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Date: 12/3/2016 5:48:00 PM
Your poem made me smile .. I can relate to all you said Ilene - on my last journey which was to Malta I got frisked at both the legs of the flight - I was told they were targeting women as no men got picked out... but the hassle of air travel is well worth it in the end:-) hugs Jan xx
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