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TRAVEL FREE, TROUBLED TRANSIENT... Lift the gate to roll with swine and the glory of it all Ride the tide all night, abide by no law and stand tall... Hitch-hike till' Hell says, "get out n' surf the SUN" Do it all over Land Rover; don't blink 'till the deed is done Divide doom by blue tears you stack Kill the clock boy; time tempts worse than crack Live the gift reckless, rest (maybe) when you die Never look back Jack; middle finger to the sky! *(brace yourself at '12, all hands on deck)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/15/2012 3:11:00 PM
Hey you changed your Avatar. WEll, this poem is very interesting. It's like you are telling that transient to just get out to the beach (surf bum, heehee). Love the last phrase, middle finger to the sky. and tempts worse than crack. Time will do it every time!!
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Date: 2/14/2012 8:01:00 PM
MR Roboto... a great poem... Have a happy valentine days... ~ :-) Always, * PD
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Date: 2/14/2012 7:57:00 PM
Joey-That ending is just too great!!! Love your new pic. too!
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Date: 2/14/2012 9:29:00 AM
Great poem JS, I would love to see your notebooks, if they are anything like mine, neither could read the others scribble.
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Date: 2/14/2012 3:16:00 AM
Very well written ...never look back my friend. - oxox love Anne-Lise Happy Valentines Day,do something romantick to day.
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