Trapped Inside Your Devil Web of Love

The gentle caring way we spoon
Is like a slow soft love tune
That invades my inner senses
Making me lose my defenses
Your my weakness--I give in
To your devil ways of sin
That control my every action
Your like a pleasant distraction
Always catching me off guard
Making me fall really hard
In your soft web of desire
Flames of passion getting higher
With each touch and hot caress
I am under your duress
But wont fight this spell I'm under
There is not one bit of wonder
How I became this far gone
Your love is just way too strong
To fight off or be without
This romance is all about
No boundaries or discretion
Just a lot of great obsession
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 30, 2014 at 9:09 AM
I enjoyed your passionate write. I'm surprised I am the first to comment, this is very well expressed. Small change line 5 your should be You're. Same change for line eight as well.
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