Kim Rodrigues Poet Tanka

Trapped At Sea

TRAPPED AT SEA

waving from the rails
blowing amorous kisses
at the crowd of studs
one must climb aboard her ship
to make this ticket worth it

the trap of ocean
so many lobsters to catch
her arms like butter
attract the opposite sex
she sips her drink and smiles big

12/17/2017
One or Two Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Rick Parise
Subject: Travel and Parting

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Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2017 at 5:24 PM This is so cool, Kim!!! Love the creative imagery!! Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2017 at 5:32 PM Thank you, Andrea! Your always cheering me on! I so appreciate it!

Vijay Pandit December 17, 2017 at 9:24 PM I see her waving and blowing kisses..you wrote the set of two poems well..imagery presents a story.. best for a win Kim. Kim Rodrigues December 17, 2017 at 10:29 PM Thank you, Vijay! Had fun with it!