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Trapped At Sea

TRAPPED AT SEA waving from the rails blowing amorous kisses at the crowd of studs one must climb aboard her ship to make this ticket worth it the trap of ocean so many lobsters to catch her arms like butter attract the opposite sex she sips her drink and smiles big 12/17/2017 One or Two Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by Rick Parise Subject: Travel and Parting

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Date: 12/18/2017 5:24:00 PM
This is so cool, Kim!!! Love the creative imagery!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2017 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Your always cheering me on! I so appreciate it!
Date: 12/17/2017 9:24:00 PM
I see her waving and blowing kisses..you wrote the set of two poems well..imagery presents a story.. best for a win Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2017 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay! Had fun with it!

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