Transparent Air

Take me to the place 
where the air is clear
and transparent, like the water 
that flows down the sides
of the monolith
an ever flowing, bounteous treasure
where my soul feels free

take me to that quiet hovel
that lies deep in the woods
an admirable little zareba
where a cave sits in the monolith
a cave that never ends
like the flowing water
and the dreams in my head


February 22nd 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 4, 2014 at 4:16 PM
wonderful win, Anne....skat
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 2:24 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
Hessler Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 6:09 PM
thank you very much
Johnson Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 11:03 AM
You fit them all in so smoothly. Great work. Love, Joyce
Hessler Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 6:09 PM
I had to look up what a zareba was thank you
Mehta Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the write on the Dreams, anne
Hessler Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 6:08 PM
thank you very much I appreciate it
Hamilton Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 3:25 AM
spelling mistake Anne you used quite it should be quiet shame as a great write congrats on placing ty for entering hugs
Hessler Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 6:08 PM
i'll get right on fixing that thank you
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