Transmutation

we woke up early one morn, ego shorn

it felt as though we were in form reborn

nodes within stirred, boundaries blurred

our head and heart, with love concurred”

Our eyes were blind but we had new sight

Of holy mind heaven's holy golden light

It was our time to meet new destiny

To shed our mislead mind and earth body

Pick up purple peace and spirits anew

Loosing our self and gaining sacred truth

There is no death inside your blood is blue

Kill your pride and fly beyond moon

Journey in time defying all you knew

Love transcends blends birthing too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 12, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Very true, we should cleanse our misled mind and body, whilst fully embracing the sacred touch of truths and positivity.. Ego can be a human's one of the biggest enemies.. Love can conquer all the negative emotions and finally give us so much peace.. A wonderful take for the contest, dear Karen, best of luck to you :)
Jones Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 9:54 PM
Thanks Hiya!
Greenhough Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 1:53 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was loving and spiritual, connected by soft words.
Jones Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 5:10 AM
Thank you for reading Hilda!
Volumes Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 1:26 AM
So well said. You encapsulated Seeker's Lines in your poem and brought them full circle. So well done. BOL and Best wishes
Jones Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 1:31 AM
Seeker is an awesome poet. Her lines were inspiring. Thanks for reading and for your kind comments.
George Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 8:13 PM
Hi Karen, you have imbibed the full essence of the prompt lines given by Unseeking Seeker and have come up with a beautiful poem. All the best dear one.
Jones Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 11:58 PM
The prompt given was uniquely beautiful and I hoped to even come near the writing goal. That was a challenge. Thanks for your kind words.
Ashley Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 7:49 PM
Dear Karen, your poetic expression is captivating and rich in light beautiful imagery and exhilarating emotion. I especially loved “kill your pride and fly beyond the moon” - simply breathtaking! Great entry for the contest.. good luck! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Jones Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 11:56 PM
So kind of you to say Susan. Thanks
Wolf Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Wonderful. Love the way you left the earthly bonds behind. Once ego, etc. is shed, there are no limits. Bravo, Gershon
Jones Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 11:54 PM
Thanks Gershon!
One Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 12:51 PM
The best poem I have read from your today.. loving the rhymes and flow to this one and great idea for the contest..
Jones Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Wow. What a wonderful compliment. I am humbled as I was unsure what to do for the contest. Thanks again Silent One.
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