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Transmutation

we woke up early one morn, ego shorn it felt as though we were in form reborn nodes within stirred, boundaries blurred our head and heart, with love concurred” Our eyes were blind but we had new sight Of holy mind heaven's holy golden light It was our time to meet new destiny To shed our mislead mind and earth body Pick up purple peace and spirits anew Loosing our self and gaining sacred truth There is no death inside your blood is blue Kill your pride and fly beyond moon Journey in time defying all you knew Love transcends blends birthing too.

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/12/2023 7:34:00 PM

Very true, we should cleanse our misled mind and body, whilst fully embracing the sacred touch of truths and positivity.. Ego can be a human's one of the biggest enemies.. Love can conquer all the negative emotions and finally give us so much peace.. A wonderful take for the contest, dear Karen, best of luck to you :)

Karen Jones
Date: 12/12/2023 9:54:00 PM

Thanks Hiya!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/12/2023 1:53:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem. It was loving and spiritual, connected by soft words.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/12/2023 5:10:00 AM

Thank you for reading Hilda!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/12/2023 1:26:00 AM

So well said. You encapsulated Seeker's Lines in your poem and brought them full circle. So well done. BOL and Best wishes

Karen Jones
Date: 12/12/2023 1:31:00 AM

Seeker is an awesome poet. Her lines were inspiring. Thanks for reading and for your kind comments.

Valsa George

Date: 12/11/2023 8:13:00 PM

Hi Karen, you have imbibed the full essence of the prompt lines given by Unseeking Seeker and have come up with a beautiful poem. All the best dear one.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 11:58:00 PM

The prompt given was uniquely beautiful and I hoped to even come near the writing goal. That was a challenge. Thanks for your kind words.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/11/2023 7:49:00 PM

Dear Karen, your poetic expression is captivating and rich in light beautiful imagery and exhilarating emotion. I especially loved “kill your pride and fly beyond the moon” - simply breathtaking! Great entry for the contest.. good luck! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 11:56:00 PM

So kind of you to say Susan. Thanks

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/11/2023 7:14:00 PM

Wonderful. Love the way you left the earthly bonds behind. Once ego, etc. is shed, there are no limits. Bravo, Gershon

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 11:54:00 PM

Thanks Gershon!

Tom Woody

Date: 12/11/2023 3:53:00 PM

For those who gain heavenly life what a change they undergo. Unimaginable, but you described it nicely

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 5:06:00 PM

Thanks for reading and your nice comment Tom.

Silent One

Date: 12/11/2023 12:51:00 PM

The best poem I have read from your today.. loving the rhymes and flow to this one and great idea for the contest..

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 1:46:00 PM

Wow. What a wonderful compliment. I am humbled as I was unsure what to do for the contest. Thanks again Silent One.