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Translucent Dreamscape

whilst
    courting 
       reveries
          in 
           chamomile 
                    fields
             day spring 
          beckons                    
      blushing
brilliantly 
   beguiled     
       diaphanous
           phantasmagoria
              seducingly 
                  unraveling
                      craving
                   gossamery
                 yet
            enticing
      thrumming 
   gently
then
   thrusting 
              softly
                  ~ k i s s ~
                        unearthing
                 secret
        meadows
    of 
poetry
    writhing 
          against 
               satin 
                  sheets
                        tongue
                 ignites 
               a 
      ravenous 
hunger

even 
       if 
          skies
              were 
                    without 
              stars
         & moon
    bid 
farewell
    warming 
              glow
                 & embracing 
              time
        eternal 
love song
       ~ e c h o i n g ~
     our 
        wonderland
            eating 
              winter away,
                 & drinking up 
                        spring sun
                             fruits 
                          of 
                     ambition
                blooming
             in 
         garden 
      of
hope

4th place contest winner

Written: March 19, 2023

A Brian Strand Premiere No 1200 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Sara Kendrick March 20, 2023 at 2:44 PM Back with congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing ...Sara

Christuraj Alex March 20, 2023 at 7:10 AM "eternal love song ~ e c h o i n g ~" - Beautiful poem. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler March 20, 2023 at 7:08 AM Great string of tootles Las. Congratulations! :)

Regina Mcintosh March 20, 2023 at 1:42 AM Beautiful, whimsical... breathtaking. A whisper of light. Love it - Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina

Vijay Pandit March 19, 2023 at 12:28 PM Yet another winning poem, my friend. You have mastered the art of this form.

Victor Buhagiar March 19, 2023 at 12:19 PM You love zigzagging your poem. Yet they make sense.

Kim Rodrigues March 19, 2023 at 12:13 PM Love the wordsmithing, my friend and the lovely trail of your translucent dreamscape…ahhh!