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whilst courting reveries in chamomile fields day spring beckons blushing brilliantly beguiled diaphanous phantasmagoria seducingly unraveling craving gossamery yet enticing thrumming gently then thrusting softly ~ k i s s ~ unearthing secret meadows of poetry writhing against satin sheets tongue ignites a ravenous hunger even if skies were without stars & moon bid farewell warming glow & embracing time eternal love song ~ e c h o i n g ~ our wonderland eating winter away, & drinking up spring sun fruits of ambition blooming in garden of hope 4th place contest winner Written: March 19, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1200 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 3/20/2023 2:44:00 PM
Back with congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing ...Sara
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Date: 3/20/2023 7:10:00 AM
"eternal love song ~ e c h o i n g ~" - Beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/20/2023 7:08:00 AM
Great string of tootles Las. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/20/2023 1:42:00 AM
Beautiful, whimsical... breathtaking. A whisper of light. Love it - Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 3/19/2023 12:28:00 PM
Yet another winning poem, my friend. You have mastered the art of this form.
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Date: 3/19/2023 12:19:00 PM
You love zigzagging your poem. Yet they make sense.
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Date: 3/19/2023 12:13:00 PM
Love the wordsmithing, my friend and the lovely trail of your translucent dreamscape…ahhh!
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