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Transitions

Summer’s ending; autumn’s pending. Nature teases, sending breezes cool and pleasing but so fleeting. Temps rise greeting summer lovers. Autumn hovers. Soon warm covers will be needed. Those who pleaded for fall’s coming will be humming. September 14, 2022 entered in a Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Placed 7th

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2022 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Looking forward to the temperatures going down a little. Sara

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2022 5:30:00 PM

Thanks SO much, Sara! Janice

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/22/2022 1:24:00 PM

Dear Janice, your wonderful footles provide a fun and lovely cascade of imagery. I love the transition of summer to fall and you’ve captured it beautifully. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2022 5:33:00 PM

Susan, thanks a MILLION! Janice

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/22/2022 10:38:00 AM

Very fun Janice. I have to admit I have a heck of a time letting go of summer and love indian summers with the warm and mellow afternoons. However, once autumn fully arrives I revel in the bounty and beauty of the season. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2022 5:34:00 PM

Sam, thanks so much! Janice

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/22/2022 10:25:00 AM

Janice, congratulations on your well-deserved win with this stunning pair of great metaphors.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2022 5:35:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sotto Poet. Janice

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/15/2022 11:19:00 AM

or shivering! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2022 11:19:00 AM

Thanks, Rico. :-) Janice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/15/2022 6:36:00 AM

Lovely pairs of imagery, Janice. Brian would love this. Best to you.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2022 11:19:00 AM

Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/14/2022 11:22:00 PM

Oh, I looove this. I see beautiful pictures as I read each group of lines. I love the changing of the seasons, I gather you as well. As much as I am not fond of snow after a while, it is always nice to have it at Christmas, don't you think? My favorite season...well, " I will be humming" I'm smiling after enjoying Transitions.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/15/2022 11:25:00 AM

Marikate, thanks for these encouraging words! In Mississippi, we don't get much snow, so we enjoy it--till it starts looking nasty! LOL! Janice