Janice Canerdy Poet Footle

Transitions

Summer’s 
ending;

autumn’s 
pending.

Nature   	
teases,			

sending	
breezes 

cool and	
pleasing

but so
fleeting.

Temps rise  	 
greeting

summer 
lovers.

Autumn 
hovers.

Soon warm
covers

will be 
needed.

Those who
pleaded

for fall’s 
coming

will be
humming.


September 14, 2022
entered in a Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest   Placed  7th

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Sara Kendrick September 22, 2022 at 3:02 PM Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Looking forward to the temperatures going down a little. Sara Janice Canerdy September 22, 2022 at 5:30 PM Thanks SO much, Sara! Janice

Susan Ashley September 22, 2022 at 1:24 PM Dear Janice, your wonderful footles provide a fun and lovely cascade of imagery. I love the transition of summer to fall and you’ve captured it beautifully. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Janice Canerdy September 22, 2022 at 5:33 PM Susan, thanks a MILLION! Janice

Sam Kauffman September 22, 2022 at 10:38 AM Very fun Janice. I have to admit I have a heck of a time letting go of summer and love indian summers with the warm and mellow afternoons. However, once autumn fully arrives I revel in the bounty and beauty of the season. Congratulations on your win! Blessings. Janice Canerdy September 22, 2022 at 5:34 PM Sam, thanks so much! Janice

Sotto Poet September 22, 2022 at 10:25 AM Janice, congratulations on your well-deserved win with this stunning pair of great metaphors. Janice Canerdy September 22, 2022 at 5:35 PM Thanks so much, Sotto Poet. Janice

Rico Leffanta September 15, 2022 at 11:19 AM or shivering! Enjoyed! Aloha! Janice Canerdy September 15, 2022 at 11:19 AM Thanks, Rico. :-) Janice

Vijay Pandit September 15, 2022 at 6:36 AM Lovely pairs of imagery, Janice. Brian would love this. Best to you. Janice Canerdy September 15, 2022 at 11:19 AM Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

Marikate Kingston September 14, 2022 at 11:22 PM Oh, I looove this. I see beautiful pictures as I read each group of lines. I love the changing of the seasons, I gather you as well. As much as I am not fond of snow after a while, it is always nice to have it at Christmas, don't you think? My favorite season...well, " I will be humming" I'm smiling after enjoying Transitions. Janice Canerdy September 15, 2022 at 11:25 AM Marikate, thanks for these encouraging words! In Mississippi, we don't get much snow, so we enjoy it--till it starts looking nasty! LOL! Janice