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winter's ending; spring is pending. cool and pleasing but so fleeting. sun beams greeting cool breeze soothing spring hue winning flowers springing sweet birds singing. all those waiting, for spring's coming, will be humming. _________ April.3.2023 ~ Placed Second~ Brian Strand Premiere. No 1205 Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/21/2023 10:38:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations! Your footle has me dancing through spring in a waltz "humming!" Marvelous! So much said in so few words! Congratulations on your win sweet friend. Sending you all the blessings a new life!
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Date: 4/4/2023 1:05:00 AM
I love the wonderful feeling brought by your gorgeous footle my dear poet friend Valsa. Congratulations on your shining win! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 4/3/2023 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations, well done :)
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Date: 4/3/2023 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations - clear winner
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Date: 4/3/2023 5:22:00 AM
Love this form, great poem of the beauty of spring , coming forth new life : ) and joy
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Date: 4/3/2023 2:04:00 AM
Beautiful
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