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winter's ending; spring is pending. cool and pleasing but so fleeting. sun beams greeting cool breeze soothing spring hue winning flowers springing sweet birds singing. all those waiting, for spring's coming, will be humming. _________ April.3.2023 ~ Placed Second~ Brian Strand Premiere. No 1205 Poetry Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Valsa, congratulations! Your footle has me dancing through spring in a waltz "humming!" Marvelous! So much said in so few words! Congratulations on your win sweet friend. Sending you all the blessings a new life!
Gasun Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 1:05 AM
I love the wonderful feeling brought by your gorgeous footle my dear poet friend Valsa. Congratulations on your shining win! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Daniel Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 7:46 PM
Congratulations, well done :)
McBride  Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Love this form, great poem of the beauty of spring , coming forth new life : ) and joy
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