Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Tanka

Transient Nest

In deep devotion
hidden infatuation 
builds a transient nest.
The captive bird flies away,
leaves feathers in broken heart.

July 7, 2018
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Line Gauthier July 31, 2018 at 8:50 PM Awesome imagery, Subimal. A most deserving win. Congrats. Subimal Sinha-Roy August 1, 2018 at 12:53 AM Thank you, Line for your visit an appreciation.

Casarah Nance July 20, 2018 at 11:40 AM Congrats! What a nice take on the theme :) Subimal Sinha-Roy July 23, 2018 at 5:00 AM Thank you for your visit.

Gregory Richard Barden July 17, 2018 at 3:09 AM Sincere congratulations on your win in the Tanka Contest, Subimal - all the best for many more successes, my friend - nicely done! :-) Subimal Sinha-Roy July 17, 2018 at 4:46 AM Thank you, Greg.

Anisha Dutta July 16, 2018 at 9:44 PM CONGRATS Subimal Sinha-Roy July 16, 2018 at 10:47 PM Many thanks.

Susan Gentry July 16, 2018 at 3:41 PM Congratulations on your win. Subimal Sinha-Roy July 16, 2018 at 10:47 PM Thank you, Susan.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2018 at 1:17 PM - Congratulations on your 8st place in the contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Subimal Sinha-Roy July 16, 2018 at 10:47 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise for your visit.

Anisha Dutta July 8, 2018 at 1:11 PM Devotion in Infatuation or Infatuation in Devotion. Whatever it is, heart breaks. Nice n touchy. Subimal Sinha-Roy July 9, 2018 at 12:02 AM Thank you for your visit.

Nette Onclaud July 7, 2018 at 10:41 AM sadly beautiful, subimal...nicely done!...huggs Subimal Sinha-Roy July 8, 2018 at 12:50 AM Thank you, Nette for your visit.

Lyric Man July 7, 2018 at 9:00 AM Ummm.. mesmerizing pen! Subimal Sinha-Roy July 8, 2018 at 12:50 AM Thank you, Lyric.