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Transient Nest

In deep devotion hidden infatuation builds a transient nest. The captive bird flies away, leaves feathers in broken heart. July 7, 2018 Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/31/2018 8:50:00 PM

Awesome imagery, Subimal. A most deserving win. Congrats.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/1/2018 12:53:00 AM

Thank you, Line for your visit an appreciation.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/20/2018 11:40:00 AM

Congrats! What a nice take on the theme :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/23/2018 5:00:00 AM

Thank you for your visit.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/17/2018 3:09:00 AM

Sincere congratulations on your win in the Tanka Contest, Subimal - all the best for many more successes, my friend - nicely done! :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/17/2018 4:46:00 AM

Thank you, Greg.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/16/2018 9:44:00 PM

CONGRATS

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2018 10:47:00 PM

Many thanks.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/16/2018 3:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2018 10:47:00 PM

Thank you, Susan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/16/2018 1:17:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 8st place in the contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2018 10:47:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise for your visit.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/8/2018 1:11:00 PM

Devotion in Infatuation or Infatuation in Devotion. Whatever it is, heart breaks. Nice n touchy.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/9/2018 12:02:00 AM

Thank you for your visit.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/7/2018 10:41:00 AM

sadly beautiful, subimal...nicely done!...huggs

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:50:00 AM

Thank you, Nette for your visit.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/7/2018 9:00:00 AM

Ummm.. mesmerizing pen!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/8/2018 12:50:00 AM

Thank you, Lyric.