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Transient

Like a transient thought
You entered my dialogue
Seeking to become
Discourse of my mind

Confusing my words
You tampered response
Bemusing my mood
Feigning what love was

Until reality grasped
A fraudulent trespass
Holding firmly at bay
Faux vision of romance

Yet, our rendezvous
Was willingly allowed--
Lascivious to assuage
Exotic wish of the heart

December 24, 2018
Placed first in standard contest #175 by Brian Strand

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2018

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Jennifer Proxenos

April 10, 2019 at 12:07 PM

Vijay, I went back a bit - love this poem - so glad you got a win because it won my heart and i had to fave it! Poetry hugs, Jennifer

February 11, 2019 at 10:48 PM

Yes, love can create many moments indeed. Many moods. Some are felt and understood- while others leave the mind and heart searching. Your thoughts tangle around each other- holding a beautiful mood. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

January 11, 2019 at 7:56 PM

Transient is such a good word for this kind of thing. I really enjoyed this one, Vijay.

Vladislav Raven

December 31, 2018 at 10:08 AM

Hi Vijay, another song to touch the heart. The rhythm flows as we ponder your musings. Loved the content of the write my friend. Have a very happy New Year. Your friend always....Mike.

Kai Michael Neumann

December 29, 2018 at 2:48 AM

I like that poem. It takes responsibility without blame ... Kind wishes, Kai

December 30, 2018 at 7:15 AM

Thank you Kai.

December 26, 2018 at 8:57 AM

A great musing of the mind. We’ve entered in to discover the maze of thought — open and wild. Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem <3

December 26, 2018 at 3:32 PM

Thank you Kim.

December 26, 2018 at 7:54 AM

What a transient thought.. So romantic.. nice flow as always..

December 26, 2018 at 3:32 PM

Thank you Silent One.

December 25, 2018 at 5:11 PM

Very romantic and very well said, Vijay. Thank you for stopping by my Christmas card to all the friends. Hope this season sees you into a path of joy and many more words of blessed wisdom.. Hugs to you my friend

December 26, 2018 at 7:31 AM

Thank you Eve. Best wishes to you for the new year.

December 25, 2018 at 1:38 PM

i like the tone of this splendid write, viyay; very enigmatic... another gem fro you... i had a fine christmas; hope you are swinging on!..huggs

December 25, 2018 at 3:02 PM

Enjoying the holidays..thanks for your visit and comments, nette. Glad you had a wonderful Christmas.

Besma Riabi Dziri

December 25, 2018 at 2:48 AM

No one would ever understand, one of a kind human state! Digging deep into the mind, trying to please and answer the call of the heart! Sometimes, it is confusing swaying between what is real and fake! "Transient" are these feelings.. A poet's insight of heart and mind would win the fight.. I like this type of writing that shakes the soul.. Wonderfully and profoundly conveyed! Warmest wishes. Merry Christmas dear Vijay, have a blissful time. God bless you.

December 25, 2018 at 6:58 AM

Merry Christmas to you Besma. Thank you for the visit, as always. Appreciate your detailed feedback. God bless you my friend.

December 24, 2018 at 8:44 PM

Merry Christmas Vijay! God bless you my friend!

December 25, 2018 at 6:56 AM

Merry Christmas to you Wren..thanks for the visit.

December 24, 2018 at 4:23 PM

Merry Christmas Vijay, peace be with you my friend...

December 24, 2018 at 7:44 PM

Merry Christmas Charlie..many thanks.

December 24, 2018 at 3:07 PM

Well-expressed thoughts of one who sees the truth about a manipulator and is breaking free! Janice

December 24, 2018 at 3:39 PM

Thank you Janice..appreciate the comments.

December 24, 2018 at 2:43 PM

Well expressed Vijay! Happy Christmas Eve ! :)

December 24, 2018 at 3:28 PM

Happy Christmas Eve to you as well Heidi. Thanks for the visit and your comments, as always.

December 24, 2018 at 2:21 PM

Love is complicated. In the sense that one may tangle around our emotions. Not meaning to confuse, but- perhaps they do. Sometimes, desires of the heart cannot be tamed. Your words always move me. ~ Brandy

December 24, 2018 at 3:27 PM

So true--sometimes desires win..appreciate your analysis Brandy. Many thanks for your kind feedback.

December 24, 2018 at 11:43 AM

Striking in its passion Vijay, Great one !!! Happy Holidays !!!

December 24, 2018 at 2:15 PM

Thank you Mike--appreciate the kind feedback. Happy Holidays!

December 24, 2018 at 9:29 AM

Nice one, Vijay, sharp understanding of the ease with which our relationships can beguile us.

December 24, 2018 at 2:15 PM

Thank you Lawrence..appreciate the visit and comments, as always.

December 24, 2018 at 9:29 AM

Nicely executed my talented friend...happy holidays if you celebrate Vijay...love & light...^WW^

December 24, 2018 at 2:14 PM

Happy Holidays to you as well WW..many thanks my friend.

December 24, 2018 at 9:08 AM

Brilliant presentation of reality versus fantasy! Nicely done my friend

December 24, 2018 at 2:14 PM

Thank you my friend--appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

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