Transformation - a Weird Choka

TRANSFORMATION – a weird Choka

Our dear Uncle Claude
He loved us kids    we loved him
He always brought us candy
Called him Santa Claude
Strange thing though    this steady change
Now he’s called Aunt Claudia

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This is not a true story
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 5:11 PM
Loving this one again!!! Hope you are having a good day and that your eyes feel ok.
Mac Donald Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 3:11 PM
A weird transformation, no doubt Daver!! You come up with the wildest stuff..LOL A master of diversity...your writes are never hum drum.;) Best to you and yours, Love, Mikki
K. Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 10:51 AM
coming back here-- really enjoyed reading this again, Dave :) & thank you for your comments-- that was a pretty cool how your dream told you what would happen with your friendship-- amazing dreams, really :) and yup old letters are such treasures :D enjoy your Sunday :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Got a chuckle...Sara
Devonshire Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Very, very funny, Daver. Love the poem and love you too, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 3:42 PM
thankxx Dave for your wonderful uplifting comments on my contest entry.. much appreciated my friend..with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Yes, the only ones I like who soar are the ones with "beautiful" wings, not those greedy ones that keep trying to get ahead or like that guy who invented FaceBook. Did you see Social Network, the movie about him ? He is super obnoxious. So definitely my poem was not about THAT brand of over acheivers. Let me go find a poem of yours I've not read yet. LUv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 10:25 PM
daver, it would be even funner if this actually was a true story. hahaha. Loved it! Luv, Andrea
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January 25, 2011 at 5:42 PM
funny weird choka---lol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:26 PM
haha.. my funny bone is hurting from laughing so Dave.. but very well written and the punch line saved for last luv... enjoyed ..and Infused by your man..meaning the man my hubby is.. making me a happy woman... Andrea also asked me about whose man? haha.. great minds and all that jazz luv..haha..
Richards Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 10:57 AM
omy....love that last line!!! yep.....adapting to some changes can be more difficult than others!! LOL !!
K. Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 10:00 AM
hahahaha -- wow that last line just made me laugh aloud! wasn't expecting that ;) enjoyed this choka of yours :) ---nikko :)
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