Transfiguration

My soul is transfigured
in your anoited presence
among these twisted vines and flowers
as they turn to harvest...

The beloved apparitions of my rite
leave me for all eternity
my soul feels like an abandoned child
forbidden in this month of March
to go and gather flowers for his brethren...

Still I gaze at the tender portrait
with timid smile always on your face
with purple-red ember of passion
fulfilled and nurtured by your favor...

I sigh freely in your presence
and seek to bring you home to me
in this field of poppy and flowers
my arms around you like twisted vines of grapes..
~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/29/2014 9:09:00 AM
I am speechless, outstanding piece! Romance at it's peak.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/29/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Richard..Good to read from you!
Date: 3/26/2014 5:16:00 PM
by the way, Ken, was this for Deb Guzzi's contest? It is so lovely, I had to tell you again..
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/26/2014 5:56:00 PM
Thanks again! No just a romantic pondering..
Date: 3/26/2014 12:42:00 PM
the depth of your very essence lights this page, ken... beautiful!.. huggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/26/2014 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Nette! Hope you're having an awesome day..
Date: 3/26/2014 12:33:00 PM
- Truly written with beautiful and warm feelings,Ken ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2014 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne! Lovely to read from you today..
Date: 3/26/2014 8:17:00 AM
I'm with Andrea on this one! Lovely imagery...but more so...love the longing in those last few lines. Great write.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/26/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Eileen for stopping by!
Date: 3/26/2014 12:16:00 AM
wow, ken, amazing imagery. A great poem to see late tonight.
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Date: 3/26/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for the lovely visit!
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