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Transcending Human Despair

there’s something about lit night which cleans pang of farewell like a healing balm, quite potent in times when despair lunges at raw veins: yet hope flames to sing with new moon and greet fresh enchantment blest- as loss grants rebirth. 9/20/2018 For Edward Ibeh’s Human Nature Contest

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/8/2018 8:59:00 AM

Very wise words. Thank you, Kai

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2018 8:50:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Congrats on your win. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/23/2018 9:22:00 AM

An expressive poem of encouragement, nette. I WISH YOU WELL!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2018 7:33:00 PM

Excellent verse, Nette. one of the best ones as I read through the list of winners. Congrats, and hey how are things going for you these days?

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2018 6:57:00 PM

well expressed Nette, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Toney

Date: 9/21/2018 5:10:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win and your positive perspective on human nature. "Yet hope flames!" ~Mark

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/21/2018 4:23:00 PM

Thanks for participating in my contest, Nette!:-) Captivating write with wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your win!

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/21/2018 2:59:00 PM

Hello Dear Nette, Full of hope and wonder. A beautifully-done verse. Best Wishes Always, Gary

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/21/2018 10:57:00 AM

Nicely done my friend...love your flow nette...love & light...^WW^

Charles Messina

Date: 9/21/2018 7:36:00 AM

Very nice, Nette Best wishes for a win...huggs

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/20/2018 5:00:00 PM

A beautiful piece of poetry; love the imagery in this one and the unfolding of the piece is spectacular! Especially love this: "when despair lunges at raw veins: "

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/20/2018 1:42:00 PM

Do you use healing balm...Nice write nette... rebirth is in every breath that we take...All the best my friend

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/20/2018 12:53:00 PM

Very good Nette, Loved "when despair lunges at raw veins". Good luck with the contest.

Chris Green

Date: 9/20/2018 12:48:00 PM

Beautifully expressed and so filled with truth. It all comes around to fill those gaps with new excitement and meaning.

Silent One

Date: 9/20/2018 9:48:00 AM

Now that is human nature.. Well expressed Nette..

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/20/2018 9:32:00 AM

Nette, your evocative poem is constructed beautifully and is a great entry on the theme. I really enjoyed it xxoo

P.M. Richter

Date: 9/19/2018 6:24:00 PM

Well said Nette - it's one big circle :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/19/2018 5:38:00 PM

Very beautiful nette! and timely!

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/19/2018 5:04:00 PM

This is fine work!! "Yet hope flames" - a line which we can all profit from reading. I am recovering from a serious illness and hope got me through it. Keep up your study of Scripture and thanks for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2018 3:42:00 PM

Very inspiring, from depth of pain to hope and rebirth. Well done Nette :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/19/2018 3:39:00 PM

A beautiful verse Nette, with despair comes hope, we should never doubt it. Tom.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/19/2018 3:21:00 PM

Very meaningful verses..hope certainly flames and loss grants rebirth..well done with these choice words that resonate..best for a win, nette.