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Transcendence

There's simply more than meets the eye and yet most think after we die is when we rise above this plane; a new existence we shall reign. These thoughts are wrong and light is life now look beyond the pain and strife Objects are not what they may seem we can not see what we don't dream. Lights and brainwaves crash to make reality is put at stake But what's the cost of mortal life if we transcend the afterlife. "Look," I'll beg for weeks on end "Please look, just look!" their sights will bend, They'll see, I think, what I see now Rise above, you can't ask how. 1-20-2022 Sponsor: Edward Ibeh "Transcendence"

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Date: 1/28/2022 5:23:00 AM
Amazing piece, Nikki:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Nikki Robinson
Date: 2/3/2022 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much!! I had fun competing :)
Date: 1/25/2022 7:48:00 PM
"reality is put at stake" - True. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Nikki Robinson
Date: 1/26/2022 12:21:00 PM
Thank you! I liked that line as well!

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