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Tranquility

Woodland reflections
In waters so calm and still
Create scene serene


For Raul's Tranquility Haiku competition

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Funom Makama

June 11, 2012 at 4:46 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Sara Kendrick

July 18, 2010 at 12:48 PM

Very descriptive write that drew a picture in my mind...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Gert W. Knop

July 12, 2010 at 8:36 AM

nicely penned and great imagerny, Janette! Enjoyed reading you Haiku toda afternoon. With 38°C outside in the shade one better stay inside!!! Thank you for your kind comment and have agreat week!...:) Gert

Christopher Mason

June 7, 2010 at 9:03 AM

It has such a splendid lilting quality -- it's such a gift to be able to convey a mood so vivdly with so few words.

Izzy Gumbo

May 18, 2010 at 2:01 PM

Beautiful Haiku Janette :)

James Fraser

May 2, 2010 at 8:47 AM

Awesome images i see in your words Janette >> James

Carrie Richards

April 17, 2010 at 7:37 AM

Readers get a sense of peace just reading this one. Nicely done, Janette! ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2010 at 7:01 AM

The waters do seem very serene, Janette. As you say, they are "so calm and still." Best wishes for success in the contest. Hope you are staying busy and finding that writing is helping lift your spirits. Love, Carolyn

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