Tranquility

Woodland reflections
In waters so calm and still
Create scene serene


For Raul's Tranquility Haiku competition

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/11/2012 4:46:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 7/18/2010 12:48:00 PM
Very descriptive write that drew a picture in my mind...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:36:00 AM
nicely penned and great imagerny, Janette! Enjoyed reading you Haiku toda afternoon. With 38°C outside in the shade one better stay inside!!! Thank you for your kind comment and have agreat week!...:) Gert
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:03:00 AM
It has such a splendid lilting quality -- it's such a gift to be able to convey a mood so vivdly with so few words.
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Date: 5/18/2010 2:01:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku Janette :)
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Date: 5/2/2010 8:47:00 AM
Awesome images i see in your words Janette >> James
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Date: 4/17/2010 7:37:00 AM
Readers get a sense of peace just reading this one. Nicely done, Janette! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/17/2010 7:01:00 AM
The waters do seem very serene, Janette. As you say, they are "so calm and still." Best wishes for success in the contest. Hope you are staying busy and finding that writing is helping lift your spirits. Love, Carolyn
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