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Tranquil twilight tuned in a mellifluous brevity, Silver stars appeared, twinkling, forming constellations bright, And nightingales sang to honour our memorable night, As we lay serene. the fine sand willing our destiny. Blessed indeed were we to find such a peaceful sandy cove I looked into her eyes and saw how they reflected stars. No doubt as years roll, the view still will be in my memoirs, Indeed, it was just our fortune to find that treasured trove. Lovingly, a soft kiss was like a rimming nightly breeze, The palm trees swished to the cool brisk zephyr murmuring low, While the cacophony of cicadas gave us their show, That flowed gently o'er silvery waves of calm coral seas. The quiet moon shone bright as it ascended in the sky We jumped into the sea surrounded with coral glowing The moonlight glistened as fish swam in shoals over-flowing. Alas it was time to leave as we uttered a deep sigh. Up we climbed our small yacht and went to have our well-earned rest, The gentle soft waves rocked us to a deep refreshing sleep, Unaware of bright coral or tropical fish beneath, We had our wonderful honeymoon the ultimate best. 10 May 2021 Writing Prompt - Calm - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Placed 1 14 syllables per line

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Date: 5/25/2021 4:06:00 AM
Victor, well done and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your beautiful poem and image, peace _Constance
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Date: 5/25/2021 5:30:00 AM
Thank you. Victor
Date: 5/23/2021 12:38:00 PM
I envy your ability to write such beautiful romantic poetry Victor, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2021 11:55:00 AM
Back with my congratulations Victor on a well deserved win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 5/23/2021 1:10:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on a wonderful win, Victor:) enjoy:)
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Date: 5/22/2021 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Victor. Sweetly penned with with awesome imagery.
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Date: 5/22/2021 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/22/2021 7:15:00 PM
Back with my congratulations for the contest win, you deserve the top place with a very nice penned poem, best wishes in future contest.
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Date: 5/13/2021 11:23:00 AM
Lovely and romantic verse, Victor, a great use of the six words for Constance contest. Well written verse. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/11/2021 10:16:00 AM
... and the winner is ... Victor!
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Date: 5/11/2021 4:51:00 AM
Beautiful sights, sounds and love! You performed a duet with these words! A winner in my book!
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Date: 5/10/2021 11:26:00 PM
Wonderfully romantic and beautifully penned Victor. Best wishes… Belle
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Date: 5/10/2021 4:21:00 PM
you utilized the words very well and ended up with a lovely and soothing poem, Victor.
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Date: 5/10/2021 11:47:00 AM
A serene captured well Victor, best wishes
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Date: 5/10/2021 11:09:00 AM
A scene of breathless wonder is created by your typically awesome imagery, Victor. Though the poem is beautiful throughout, the second verse is my favorite. Nice work and best wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 5/10/2021 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem with lovely imaging, rhyme, and flow. I enjoyed reading your poem, and wish you every success in the contest, Victor.
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Date: 5/10/2021 7:31:00 AM
This is really exquisitely written, Victor, peaceful and romantic:)
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Date: 5/10/2021 5:07:00 AM
Exquisite images of nature intertwined with love and romance. Excellent write, Victor--enjoyed the tenor of your enclosed rhymes.
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Date: 5/10/2021 4:06:00 AM
Hello Victor - Contest or no contest this entry speaks. Never do you fail to display imagery and special moments in time. You have a way of taking us away. Best wishes for the contest and best wishes to you always. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 5/10/2021 3:31:00 AM
I think you aced it Victor :)
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Date: 5/10/2021 2:11:00 AM
A very well-penned poem, dear Victor full of sensations and aspirations, I'm sure Constance will like this, I wish it will top win, have a great day, my friend
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Date: 5/10/2021 1:52:00 AM
- WoooW .... Victor, what a wonderful poem ... wish it was my honeymoon :) - A top win in the contest I would think ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) * It goes better every day, with small steps ... thank you :)
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