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Tranquil Twilight Tuned

Tranquil twilight tuned in a mellifluous brevity,
Silver stars appeared, twinkling, forming constellations bright,
And nightingales sang to honour our memorable night,
As we lay serene. the fine sand willing our destiny.

Blessed indeed were we to find such a peaceful sandy cove
I looked into her eyes and saw how they reflected stars.
No doubt as years roll, the view still will be in my memoirs,
Indeed, it was just our fortune to find that treasured trove.

Lovingly, a soft kiss was like a rimming nightly breeze,
The palm trees swished to the cool brisk zephyr murmuring low,
While the cacophony of cicadas gave us their show,
That flowed gently o'er silvery waves of calm coral seas.

The quiet moon shone bright as it ascended in the sky
We jumped into the sea surrounded with coral glowing
The moonlight glistened as fish swam in shoals over-flowing.
Alas it was time to leave as we uttered a deep sigh.

Up we climbed our small yacht and went to have our well-earned rest,
The gentle soft waves rocked us to a deep refreshing sleep,
Unaware of bright coral or tropical fish beneath,
We had our wonderful honeymoon the ultimate best.

10 May 2021
Writing Prompt - Calm - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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La France Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 4:06 AM
Victor, well done and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your beautiful poem and image, peace _Constance
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Thank you. Victor
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 12:38 PM
I envy your ability to write such beautiful romantic poetry Victor, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 11:55 AM
Back with my congratulations Victor on a well deserved win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Daniel Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 1:10 AM
Back to congratulate you on a wonderful win, Victor:) enjoy:)
Evans Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Congratulations, Victor. Sweetly penned with with awesome imagery.
Alex Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Back with my congratulations for the contest win, you deserve the top place with a very nice penned poem, best wishes in future contest.
Roper Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Lovely and romantic verse, Victor, a great use of the six words for Constance contest. Well written verse. Hugs Eve
Seeker Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 10:16 AM
... and the winner is ... Victor!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:51 AM
Beautiful sights, sounds and love! You performed a duet with these words! A winner in my book!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 11:26 PM
Wonderfully romantic and beautifully penned Victor. Best wishes… Belle
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:21 PM
you utilized the words very well and ended up with a lovely and soothing poem, Victor.
May Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 11:47 AM
A serene captured well Victor, best wishes
Buehler Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 11:09 AM
A scene of breathless wonder is created by your typically awesome imagery, Victor. Though the poem is beautiful throughout, the second verse is my favorite. Nice work and best wishes for the contest. :)
Hankins Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Beautiful poem with lovely imaging, rhyme, and flow. I enjoyed reading your poem, and wish you every success in the contest, Victor.
Daniel Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 7:31 AM
This is really exquisitely written, Victor, peaceful and romantic:)
Pandit Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Exquisite images of nature intertwined with love and romance. Excellent write, Victor--enjoyed the tenor of your enclosed rhymes.
Ricci Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:06 AM
Hello Victor - Contest or no contest this entry speaks. Never do you fail to display imagery and special moments in time. You have a way of taking us away. Best wishes for the contest and best wishes to you always. Have a wonderful day.
Rose  Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 3:31 AM
I think you aced it Victor :)
Poet Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 2:11 AM
A very well-penned poem, dear Victor full of sensations and aspirations, I'm sure Constance will like this, I wish it will top win, have a great day, my friend
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 1:52 AM
- WoooW .... Victor, what a wonderful poem ... wish it was my honeymoon :) - A top win in the contest I would think ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) * It goes better every day, with small steps ... thank you :)
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