Tranquil Moments

Crashing waves of peace,
On the open sandy beach.
The clouds fill the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Townsend Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 6:59 AM
Perfect form and the imagery is amazing. I can picture the beach. Very tranquil indeed. Smiles from Lolita
Degenhardt Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 7:51 AM
They most certainly are tranquil! Excellent form, flow and imagery. Michael
Neal Avatar
February 24, 2009 at 2:57 AM
Tranquil it is and inspiring. This has great visuals. DN
Parish Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 9:19 PM
Makes me want to be at the beach...Smile!
Goombi Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 1:54 AM
the ocean scenes are nice to read, you take my mind on a ride. -Boo
Martin Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 1:20 AM
Sitting by the ocean is a nice feeling. Yo done an amazing job with this one. Tyler
Neal Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 1:04 AM
Tranquil moments of peace they are, Stunning work Raul. Love E.
H. Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 3:03 PM
Well written, beautiful imagery. Wish I was there... ~Jen~
Higgins Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 6:04 AM
This is so beautiful Raul.. I want to be there my friend.
Winter Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 5:45 AM
Well this is such an excellent Haiku, I am simply there. You nailed it. A moving and breathtaking visual. Love, Shar
P. Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 1:36 AM
yes, i would love that moment... great haiku, my friend!! nicely done! ~ Arany
Strand Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 12:31 AM
Beautiful image Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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February 21, 2009 at 10:19 PM
Being by the water fills me with tranquilty too so I can really relate to your words. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
Gass Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 8:40 PM
Excellent imagery, Raul. Beautiful Haiku, as always perfect! Love, Robin
Gorelick Avatar
February 21, 2009 at 8:17 PM
I really like this Raul, I so love the beach and this takes me there. BG
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