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Tranquil Moment

skimming stones on lake
splish splash splish splash plop
rainbow arcs blue sky


Bite Size 8  poetry contest

sponsored by Line Gauthier

06/19/21

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/24/2021 10:04:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/tranquil haiku write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win............ Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 6/24/2021 7:20:00 AM Back to congratulate you, Jan:) Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/24/2021 5:39:00 AM Hello Jan, yes that would be tranquil. enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 6/24/2021 12:54:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... including the photo. God bless you. Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 6/23/2021 11:48:00 PM Sure tranquility. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/21/2021 8:18:00 PM The very epitome of tranquility, methinks. Great contest entry, Jan! :) gw Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/21/2021 5:29:00 AM A lovely Summer day! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 6/20/2021 10:51:00 PM Very nice, Jan:) Login to Reply

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 6/20/2021 8:52:00 PM Read my poem all poets are unique. Since I mentioned you in that poem, wanted you to read it. Have a wonderful day ahead! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/20/2021 12:42:00 PM - A wonderful haiku, Jan :) - I'm home and it's getting better day by day ... I'm terribly impatient ... I'm so tired of "the quiet life" ... but I do everything to avoid more operations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 6/20/2021 11:28:00 AM I hope this cheers up Connie, although during June, she gets to see beautiful sunsets over the Pacific ocean accompanied by the moon and evening star setting. Peace and tranquillity restoreth the soul. Well done, Jan! Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/20/2021 1:01:00 AM This I loved very much Great imagery. Hugs. XXoo Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 6/19/2021 5:54:00 PM I love this poem, Jan. Especially with its onomatopoeia. Don't see that very often. Looks like a winner to me. Login to Reply

Jenna Logan Date: 6/19/2021 4:16:00 PM It sure is a peaceful setting. Nicely written, jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 4:21:00 PM Thanks and I appreciate your mail Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet Date: 6/19/2021 3:17:00 PM I enjoyed reading this illustrative haiku, which incorporates both sonic and sight. Best for a win, Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 4:20:00 PM Thanks Lasaad:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman Date: 6/19/2021 1:54:00 PM Jan, I love this! Such a picturesque haiku, using sound and visual. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 2:06:00 PM Thanks Kim was based on observation of a man on the beach:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless Date: 6/19/2021 1:37:00 PM been there, done that, very nice Haiku Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/19/2021 1:46:00 PM Thanks John I was watching a guy skimming stones the other day, he looked like he was having so much and it inspired me to write:-) hugs Jan xx