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skimming stones on lake splish splash splish splash plop rainbow arcs blue sky Bite Size 8 poetry contest sponsored by Line Gauthier 06/19/21

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Date: 6/24/2021 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful/tranquil haiku write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win............
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:20:00 AM
Back to congratulate you, Jan:)
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:39:00 AM
Hello Jan, yes that would be tranquil. enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
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Date: 6/24/2021 12:54:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... including the photo. God bless you.
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Date: 6/23/2021 11:48:00 PM
Sure tranquility.
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Date: 6/21/2021 8:18:00 PM
The very epitome of tranquility, methinks. Great contest entry, Jan! :) gw
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Date: 6/21/2021 5:29:00 AM
A lovely Summer day!
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Date: 6/20/2021 10:51:00 PM
Very nice, Jan:)
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Date: 6/20/2021 8:52:00 PM
Read my poem all poets are unique. Since I mentioned you in that poem, wanted you to read it. Have a wonderful day ahead!
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Date: 6/20/2021 12:42:00 PM
- A wonderful haiku, Jan :) - I'm home and it's getting better day by day ... I'm terribly impatient ... I'm so tired of "the quiet life" ... but I do everything to avoid more operations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/20/2021 11:28:00 AM
I hope this cheers up Connie, although during June, she gets to see beautiful sunsets over the Pacific ocean accompanied by the moon and evening star setting. Peace and tranquillity restoreth the soul. Well done, Jan!
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Date: 6/20/2021 1:01:00 AM
This I loved very much Great imagery. Hugs. XXoo
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Date: 6/19/2021 5:54:00 PM
I love this poem, Jan. Especially with its onomatopoeia. Don't see that very often. Looks like a winner to me.
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Date: 6/19/2021 4:16:00 PM
It sure is a peaceful setting. Nicely written, jan.
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Date: 6/19/2021 4:21:00 PM
Thanks and I appreciate your mail Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/19/2021 3:17:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this illustrative haiku, which incorporates both sonic and sight. Best for a win, Jan
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Date: 6/19/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Lasaad:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2021 1:54:00 PM
Jan, I love this! Such a picturesque haiku, using sound and visual. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/19/2021 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Kim was based on observation of a man on the beach:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/19/2021 1:37:00 PM
been there, done that, very nice Haiku
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Date: 6/19/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thanks John I was watching a guy skimming stones the other day, he looked like he was having so much and it inspired me to write:-) hugs Jan xx

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