Trance

The feeling of anguish stared at me Took my sight to the depth of his psyche I got blind by his seer of visions And my ears were filled with echoes of fear Visions emerged every unit of time As I lost myself in the labyrinths of his mind All I could sense was hope and despair Staring each other for fate to decide Soon the conceit began to fade I was freed from the chaotic space And as I came to the factual world I could feel his life in the tip of my hands The power of ruth killed the beast in me Before I knew, he was freed from me And as I watched him come to life I finally understood the meaning of a life.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/13/2024 10:08:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.