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The first train, a smoke puffing monster, ran in India, Moving like a millipede, cautious, yet, no phobia; As though well-chosen astronauts, lucky four guests traveled, In cozy, cool, curtained compartments cautiously castled... Soon, trains - thought of as luxury, prestige, status, and style - Turned to be thrift trips that take travelers so long a mile, A beggar could move in it singing, dancing, and begging; Clowns, jugglers, and vendors easily could make their living... The Indian trains and rails have long-lasting histories, Mass accidents, like puzzles, have remained great mysteries; Derailments, like earthquakes, shake and take the trivial tracks, Direct collisions, like wild-bore hits, tricked by timely cracks... Dangers, unintended, like calamities, die away, Traumas of accidents, into normalcy, bloom someday; Intentional human errors do corrode moral sense, Like Abel, they knock the closed castles of human conscience... A great train-trauma the times of nation never forgets, Like horrible nightmares, innocent hearts got terrorized; Is the partition-time human life slaughter, like cattle, Sending them in blood pools by trains, like dead in the battle... Then the religious bitterness in the form of riot, Murdering, blazing - young, old, women and children - quiet; Singing, dancing - like the god of death - around dead bodies, Joyous, on the death of humanity, like dry poppies… Common human beings here, like animals, do not care, Many trains - as late as twelve hours, daily - all through the year; Deaths and murders - like sunrise and set - if trains often bear, Doesn't the goal of the invention of trains seem sheer sneer? 13 October 2021 Railroads, A Historical Glance Back Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 11/17/2021 5:33:00 PM
Christuraj, congratulations on your winning placement in the poetry contest 'Railroads, A Historical Glance Back' poetry contest with your amazing educational and well written poem 'Trains'. Sometimes we romanticize train travel, but there is also the dangers and trauma of the rails as well. Thank you for your contribution, and again, congratulations!
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Date: 11/16/2021 6:57:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for educating me about trains... in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 11/16/2021 12:41:00 PM
Congrats on a well written poem and winner!
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Date: 11/16/2021 8:57:00 AM
Your poetic work is both historical and intriguing to read, Christuraj. Trains have been a silent “witness” to the unfolding of human nature and tragedy. Well done, and congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/16/2021 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Christuraj, for your win in the contest for this captivating verse! It kept me rapt to the end. Thank you for your kind comments re my win and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
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Date: 11/16/2021 6:53:00 AM
I like your use of Alliterations in this fine write, Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/16/2021 3:49:00 PM
You covered a lot of territory in your poem about trains and their sometimes not so glorious history.Well done, chris.
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Date: 10/17/2021 6:02:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/15/2021 2:46:00 PM
What a brilliant portrayal of rail systems in India! I am quite familiar - as a young child, enjoyed train rides. Now when I hear about the accidents due to human errors and callousness - I feel terrible. Your example of travels during partition is perfect history. Keep writing great poetry, Christuraj. Btw, I posted a blog about translations from Tagore - you might be interested. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/15/2021 10:32:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/15/2021 12:09:00 PM
What an education you've given me in this poem, Alex. From what you've written, the 'sneer' sure does make sense. Thanks, Gershon
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/15/2021 10:32:00 PM
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Date: 10/14/2021 8:40:00 AM
Very interesting history intertwined with sadness, Very nicely crafted
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/14/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/14/2021 6:14:00 AM
Interesting and educational lines penned in this one. Reads like a good contender to me in the contest. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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