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Trails Blazing

A celestial season in the sky sun's rays pierce clouds on high Trails blazing, magenta-tint orange Mikado performance, amplified by peeks at the bluest backdrops framing majestic sundrops ... when suddenly, to my dismay bright colors fade ~ all is gray October 23, 2022 Entry in a Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/28/2022 11:47:00 AM

Nothing fades in the beauty of this Gershon - tra-la - may the threatened cloud pass away!! You have beautifully articulated autumn's capricious personality in color filled lines! Congratulations on your win! Delightful to see it on the winners list! Blessings of bright colors in majestic sundrops! BWT - The Mikado is one of my favorite G&S operettas.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2022 3:12:00 PM

“Fan” tastic! Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2022 8:41:00 PM

Thanks, Fannie! (Couldn't resist) ~ Tastic

Ann Peck

Date: 10/26/2022 9:26:00 AM

I especially love your ~framing majestic sundrops~ that's lovely. Congrats on fourth place!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2022 8:30:00 PM

Ann, I appreciate you telling me what moved you about this write. Always very helpful! Flowers and Fragrance, Gershon

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/26/2022 8:46:00 AM

Whoa!! I now wonder what happened. Good work in this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2022 8:34:00 PM

Sara, always nice to see your avatar, and thank you for noticing my placement in Brian's contest. Peace and Tranquility, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2022 7:52:00 AM

- At this time of year the sky is almost always grey... congratulations on your 4th place in the contest, Gershon :) - hugs

Michael Tor

Date: 10/24/2022 3:05:00 AM

What a surprise that would be Gershon. Give me the colors back better than gray skies anyday...

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 10/24/2022 2:15:00 AM

Mikado performance is very nice! Elizabeth

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2022 8:41:00 PM

the Mikado is such an unusual experience for a Westerner like me. ~ Cowhand