Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Trails Blazing

A celestial season in the sky
    sun's rays pierce clouds on high
  Trails blazing, magenta-tint orange
    Mikado performance, amplified

  by peeks at the bluest backdrops
    framing majestic sundrops ...
  when suddenly, to my dismay
    bright colors fade ~ all is gray



         October 23, 2022
       Entry in a Brian Strand 
      Premiere Choice Contest

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Sam Kauffman October 28, 2022 at 11:47 AM Nothing fades in the beauty of this Gershon - tra-la - may the threatened cloud pass away!! You have beautifully articulated autumn's capricious personality in color filled lines! Congratulations on your win! Delightful to see it on the winners list! Blessings of bright colors in majestic sundrops! BWT - The Mikado is one of my favorite G&S operettas.

Kim Rodrigues October 26, 2022 at 3:12 PM “Fan” tastic! Congratulations! Gershon Wolf October 26, 2022 at 8:41 PM Thanks, Fannie! (Couldn't resist) ~ Tastic

Ann Peck October 26, 2022 at 9:26 AM I especially love your ~framing majestic sundrops~ that's lovely. Congrats on fourth place! Gershon Wolf October 26, 2022 at 8:30 PM Ann, I appreciate you telling me what moved you about this write. Always very helpful! Flowers and Fragrance, Gershon

Sara Kendrick October 26, 2022 at 8:46 AM Whoa!! I now wonder what happened. Good work in this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Gershon Wolf October 26, 2022 at 8:34 PM Sara, always nice to see your avatar, and thank you for noticing my placement in Brian's contest. Peace and Tranquility, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2022 at 7:52 AM - At this time of year the sky is almost always grey... congratulations on your 4th place in the contest, Gershon :) - hugs

Michael Tor October 24, 2022 at 3:05 AM What a surprise that would be Gershon. Give me the colors back better than gray skies anyday...

Elizabeth Mccann October 24, 2022 at 2:15 AM Mikado performance is very nice! Elizabeth Gershon Wolf October 26, 2022 at 8:41 PM the Mikado is such an unusual experience for a Westerner like me. ~ Cowhand