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Trails Blazing

A celestial season in the sky
    sun's rays pierce clouds on high
  Trails blazing, magenta-tint orange
    Mikado performance, amplified

  by peeks at the bluest backdrops
    framing majestic sundrops ...
  when suddenly, to my dismay
    bright colors fade ~ all is gray



         October 23, 2022
       Entry in a Brian Strand 
      Premiere Choice Contest

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Sam Kauffman Date: 10/28/2022 11:47:00 AM Nothing fades in the beauty of this Gershon - tra-la - may the threatened cloud pass away!! You have beautifully articulated autumn's capricious personality in color filled lines! Congratulations on your win! Delightful to see it on the winners list! Blessings of bright colors in majestic sundrops! BWT - The Mikado is one of my favorite G&S operettas. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/26/2022 3:12:00 PM “Fan” tastic! Congratulations! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 10/26/2022 8:41:00 PM Thanks, Fannie! (Couldn't resist) ~ Tastic

Ann Peck Date: 10/26/2022 9:26:00 AM I especially love your ~framing majestic sundrops~ that's lovely. Congrats on fourth place! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 10/26/2022 8:30:00 PM Ann, I appreciate you telling me what moved you about this write. Always very helpful! Flowers and Fragrance, Gershon

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/26/2022 8:46:00 AM Whoa!! I now wonder what happened. Good work in this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 10/26/2022 8:34:00 PM Sara, always nice to see your avatar, and thank you for noticing my placement in Brian's contest. Peace and Tranquility, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2022 7:52:00 AM - At this time of year the sky is almost always grey... congratulations on your 4th place in the contest, Gershon :) - hugs Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 10/24/2022 3:05:00 AM What a surprise that would be Gershon. Give me the colors back better than gray skies anyday... Login to Reply

Elizabeth Mccann Date: 10/24/2022 2:15:00 AM Mikado performance is very nice! Elizabeth Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 10/26/2022 8:41:00 PM the Mikado is such an unusual experience for a Westerner like me. ~ Cowhand