Trails

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**Syllable counter checked, 5-7-5, 5-7-5, 5-7-5, 5-7-5, 5-7-5, 5-7-5 A brevity trails of life's bounty, engaging the elements nigh, be they neath, be they sides, be they all around, starts of a summer June saffron breaths of warmth, ochered until the leaves fall, recalls September's colorful hints tinged orangey hues soften cools an autumn breeze cease harks December snows, delight sprinkles of white dust bouts colored lights, until March begins a greener spring, another year starts a new trail.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2019 6:07:00 PM

This type of poem, glory be, is the type that is often selected as POTD---and you have penned it in yet another unusual format, the choka. ~ gw in Chic - AWE -go.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/5/2019 6:38:00 PM

When discovered, I've written such a form, 'FLAMES OF THE EVERGREEN' & 'LOKI'S FALL FROM AESIR', but gave it another format yet this be its truest form GW, Aloha William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/5/2019 4:49:00 PM

Another year starts a new trail...nicely said! Hugs...Kim

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/5/2019 5:05:00 PM

Yes they'd be the dirtless trails for cleansed soles/souls Kim, Aloha William