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Trail of Diamonds

My eyes close to dream
the unknown abyss surrounds
to where I don't know
on opening, I'm alive
I see trails of diamonds









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Gautami Phookan

May 2, 2011 at 7:42 AM

Just so beautiful, I'm trying to imagine what those trails of diamond would look like...

James Peranteau

May 2, 2011 at 5:53 AM

A thought provoking, well done Tanka my friend ! I'm going to end my session with you by reading that Limerick that seems appealing dear poet....james

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 2, 2011 at 1:03 AM

I really like how you ended this one, James! Wonderful contrast to the abyss you speak of... :)

Andrea Dietrich

May 1, 2011 at 10:10 PM

great imagery. I quite like this one, James!

Joe Maverick

April 29, 2011 at 2:01 PM

Enjoyed this (gem) of a piece James, certainly has added luster to my day.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 29, 2011 at 1:45 PM

Wonderful imagery James and u know diamonds are a girls best friend..so where is this trail u say luv? creative and cleverly penned luv.. happy weekend..