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Tragic Death of a Child

             Like a moth
                                 in a candle flame
                       your light went out
                                   so suddenly


             your untimely death
                           hit me so hard



                               my heavy heart
                                      is still beating
                          yet it beats
                                                 in my chest
                                like a lead balloon
                    this terrible news
                                        it’s dragging me 

                                    d

                                                       o

                                                                           w

                                                                                        n

                      I can’t begin 
                                      to imagine the pain
                of losing a child
                               at any age


                                        here today...
                                                           gone tomorrow


                                                                           life is so fragile

In memory of a Katie Robley - a lovely student I’d worked with at school, she was tragically killed in a car accident at the weekend ... she was just 19, her boyfriend is in a critical condition. 

I’d just spent 3 days in London with my son and the dreadful news has hit very hard.

10/28/19

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Warren Doll Date: 11/8/2019 6:15:00 PM So sorry for your loss, Jan. Healing prayers coming your way~ Warren Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 11/3/2019 5:23:00 AM Such a sad story. Such a good write. Kai Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/3/2019 2:29:00 PM Thanks Kai, seems speed was the main issue - so sad:-( hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty Date: 11/2/2019 1:24:00 PM Shame Jan Lovely tribute such sad news and so young truly tragic Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/3/2019 2:28:00 PM thanks Christopher it is truly tragic in so many ways:-( hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 10/30/2019 4:53:00 PM Hi Jan, This is such a sad and hard write to read. My heart goes out to her family and you. I hope the boyfriend recovers.My mom knows what it feels like, my brother died young. You expressed your feelings well in this sad yet creative piece- Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/30/2019 7:02:00 PM aww I', so sorry you can relate to it personally through the experience with your bother, i cant imagine the pain of losing a child :-( hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/30/2019 9:26:00 AM This is so sad. You expressed this with great depth. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/30/2019 7:00:00 PM Thanks Rick I hadn't intended to write about the sad event but I never know where my muse will go. hugs jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 10/29/2019 11:41:00 AM Such sad news, so sorry for the loss of those who knew and loved her. A touching tribute Jan. Big Hug Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/30/2019 7:00:00 PM thanks Cecilia, its been a tough few days from the highs of being with my son to coming home to tragic news:-( hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/29/2019 6:40:00 AM So sorry, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 11:11:00 AM It's so heartbreaking Kim, i am fine now but the poem had to be written i was in shock after having such a fabulous time with our son for 3 days in London and came down to earth with a bump:-( hugs jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/29/2019 6:06:00 AM Oh Jan, I am so sorry to hear. I agree that when we have children and we hear news like that it hits home. We are more vulnerable then we remember at times. My prayers are with the family of the girl, and with you, Have a wonderful day dear friend. xo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 11:10:00 AM thanks Pixie:-) hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/29/2019 4:22:00 AM So so sorry. Such a tragedy. God bless you dear Jan... Love to you, Gina Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 11:10:00 AM I am fine was just so shocked, the impact will be felt on our little island for a long time:-( hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/28/2019 7:27:00 PM so sorry to hear about this, jan! your poem is very sad but very touching... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 11:06:00 AM I had to write the poem Ilene I felt so sad, just been having 3 days of fun in London with our son and then you come back crashing down to earth with news like this:-( hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 10/28/2019 6:00:00 PM One of my Norfolk ancestors had 23-children, but only 8-survived to become adults. Wars, accidents, pestilence, there is always something that makes time together most precious. Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 11:05:00 AM oh gosh Rico, that is so sad indeed:-( hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/28/2019 4:41:00 PM A terrible tragedy Jan, I cant imagine what her parents must be going through. No parent should have to bury their child. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 11:02:00 AM It's heartbreaking to outlive your children:-( my heart goes out to anyone how has lost a child of any age:-( hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier Date: 10/28/2019 4:24:00 PM So sorry to hear about this tragedy, Jan. Lovely tribute. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 11:02:00 AM Thanks Line I think it hit me so hard as we'd just spent 3 wonderful days with my son - don't know how I'd cope if anything happened to him:-( hugs jan xx

Ts Poetry Date: 10/28/2019 3:01:00 PM Such an awful tragedy Jan. My heart bleeds for the family Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 10:59:00 AM it is heartbreaking on so many levels TS:-( hugs jan xx

Judy Ball Date: 10/28/2019 2:46:00 PM How terrible. To lose a child is the utmost nightmare for any parent. No one should ever have to bury a child. A fine tribute to two fine students. God Bless my friend. JB Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 10:59:00 AM thanks Judy, so far no news on the condition of her boyfriend, the news is so tragic katie was such a lovely young lady:-( hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/28/2019 2:16:00 PM - Oh, Jan ... so terribly sad ... a youth in bloom ... my thoughts turn to the family and friends - R.I.P. Katie Robley - hugs // Anne-Lise :( Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 10:56:00 AM Thanks Anne-Lise, the crowd funding page set up for her has already got over double its target, some of the money is to go to a mental health charity, the other to the families:-)hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner Date: 10/28/2019 2:11:00 PM This is so touching, it is so painful to lose a child, with the rest of their years gone forever. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/29/2019 10:55:00 AM thanks Michelle, after spending 3 amazing days with my son it hit me hard to come home to such sad news:-( hugs jan xx

Chris Green Date: 10/28/2019 11:33:00 AM A sad poem about a very sad tragedy Jan. I am so sorry to hear this news. My thoughts are with you and her family. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2019 2:03:00 PM Thanks Chris, I had only seen her very briefly since she left school. I guess it hit me after having had such an amazing 3 days with my son - don't know how I would cope if anything happened to him:-( hugs Jan xx

Bobby May Date: 10/28/2019 11:17:00 AM Jan I am so very sorry my sweet friend, no words can heal a heart when things like this happen. So young, I hope her boyfriend comes through okay her poor mother and father what a great loss to them also, Love ya my sweet friend! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2019 2:02:00 PM Thanks Bobby... we had an amazing time with my son over 3 days, I heard about the crash on Friday and on Sunday discovered it was Katie who had died, I guess I came came from a high at being with my son and having such fun to feeling so sad for her family and that of her boyfriend:-( hugs Jan xx