Tragedy In France

A concert hall was filled to capacity,
with revelers unaware of the atrocity,
they were about to face.
Evil dressed in black, intent to kill,
aimed their weapons with precise skill,
and fired into that place.

A favored cafe on a Paris street,
where friends, loved ones oft would meet,
drinking their cafe au lait.
Assassins came and took their position,
to kill and terrorize their intention,
on that tragic day.

Chaos ran rampant in Paris, France,
as ISIS took its murderous stance,
against humanity.
Many were wounded and many died,
and all the world was horrified,
at such insanity.

Anger rises alongside mourning.
Retaliation swift, without warning,
the French fight back.
The world must stand up to these thugs,
destroy them, squash them just like bugs.
We can't be slack.

We mourn with France for those who died,
and we will stand close by her side,
until we win,
this war against cruelty and hate.
Annihilation will not be our fate.
We won't give in.



11/24/15
For Debbie Guzzi's Rime Couee-tail-rhyme 
contest for France
Tied for 3rd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 9, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your awesome win. LINDA
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January 13, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Thank you so much, Linda!
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January 4, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Kim. CONGRATULATIONS on your win. HugS *SKAT*
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January 9, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Thank you, SKAT! I appreciate your comments!
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January 4, 2016 at 6:21 AM
Well done, Kim, and an echo of all our sentiments. Congrats, Viv x
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January 9, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Thank you, Viv! I appreciate your comments!
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January 3, 2016 at 8:00 PM
So glad to read your fine work again Kim. I hope you and the family are well & will have a great 2016 Congrad's Light & Love
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January 9, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest, Debbie! I'm thrilled! Thank you for your well wishes and I wish you a very fruitful and prosperous New Year!
Promise Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Great expression and passionate feelings on the matter! I also agree with the others comments to stamp out evil. Formerly groups claimed their acts, now their coming out in disguise everyone has to be watched!
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December 6, 2015 at 5:59 PM
Rainbow, thank you for your comment!
Promise Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 10:11 PM
This will cause us to do exactly what they are doing: gun down all!
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December 4, 2015 at 10:09 PM
a 7 and best wishes for the contest. RP. Now in peace time we trade with everyone, shouldn't these "bullies" say who they are? There is enough conflict!
Adams Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 6:01 AM
Great job on this, Kim. Exactly right, and most of the world says AMEN.
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December 6, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comment, Cona!
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December 1, 2015 at 11:29 AM
This piece is full of emotion and truths, as the author uses her skills to bring the experience alive in the reader's mind with vivid clarity. Emile.
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December 6, 2015 at 5:56 PM
Emile, thank you for your encouraging comments!
Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Such a very well expressed poem Kim, and a topic close to my heart! Loved this. A7
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December 6, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Thank you so much, Arthur!
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November 29, 2015 at 5:10 AM
"Anger rises alongside mourning. Retaliation swift, without warning, the French fight back. The world must stand up to these thugs, destroy them, squash them just like bugs. We can't be slack..." "Annihilation will not be our fate. We won't give in." ISIS, do you listen? Thoughtful composition! Love it, Kim.
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December 6, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Thank you so much, Agona!
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November 28, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Kim, your poem is amazing. So emotionally expressed and comprehensive of the horror experienced. I feel yours will be high on the winner's list! Hugs, Sandra
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December 6, 2015 at 5:49 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comment, Sandra!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Excellent Kim! I hope to see this on the winner's list!
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December 6, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Thank you so much, Connie!
Dunn Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Dear Kim Love the rough edge of your poem, we must stand up to these international bullies, your right on the mark on this one, you tell it straight and right to the point of the matter, again bravo on your work, cheri
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December 6, 2015 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Cheryl! I'm really just a quiet, timid person but things like this make me mad.
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November 27, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Kim, so well written on such a sad event, you captured the horror of it, 7, and best of luck in the contest, and I want to thank you for my wonderful win in your Pleiades contest, I am honored and thank you for all your visits to my poetry ~
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December 6, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Thank you, Constance and you are most welcome!
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November 27, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Well done, Kim. I wish you luck in this difficult contest. Hope you had a lovely thanksgiving. Just popping in for a short time to see some of my favorite poets!
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December 6, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I'm honored that I'm one of the poets you have popped in to see!
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November 27, 2015 at 12:33 PM
stirring me to choose peace than terror... a most vivid write done withe heartfelt words,kim... huggs
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December 6, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Thank you for your comment, Nette!
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November 27, 2015 at 5:53 AM
Reads like a winner..As we kill off those who are trained to do these deeds, they start more from the cradle to continue in the footsteps of evil..Sad situation..Great work about the situation..Soon He is coming to take His own out of this world of terror..Thanks for the visit to say congrats..Sara
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December 6, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Sara, I am afraid you are right. We will never eradicate evil until Jesus returns. Thank you for your comment!
Lindley Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Great poem expressing a strong spirit and unyielding courage against pure evil. Super 7 my friend..
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December 6, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Thank you so much for your comment, Robert!
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November 24, 2015 at 2:09 PM
- Amen - Let peace and love win over hate and evil ! - (7) - Luck in contest, dear Kim - A first class writing - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 6, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Thank you for your comment, Anne-Lise!
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