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Tragedy In Black

by: Eric L. Boddie "A History Of..." As it has come to be Foundations of slavery define my destiny Relentless jealousy continues our oppression Only the Black American is subject to such obsession African American, naw, I prefer black myself Me being a native to America ever since my first breath Every act of discrimination, every possible form of abuse Reflections of the Word Of God being just one excuse In actuality, only hate can bestow such cruelty upon a fellow man Can you imagine your mother tortured with observation as your only stand And that is the history that I and others like me must endure No humanity exists in my ancestors being three fifths of a human and that's for sure Something wicked has been revealed....after all, my people are continuously killed..... written: August 16, 2015 contest: Tragedy in Black sponsor: Bev Smith

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/30/2018 10:52:00 PM
Amen!! You said it all, E ... 'nuff said. Love and joy always, bruh.
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Date: 7/30/2018 10:59:00 PM
thanks freddie, but sadly, enough will NEVER be said....i mean the president endorses the klan....
Date: 1/17/2018 3:47:00 PM
Truth! Powerful Voice!
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Date: 10/6/2015 11:31:00 AM
Gives me goosebumps! Amazing! <3 -TJ
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Date: 10/5/2015 8:26:00 AM
How do you do that? You make me smile, you make me cry, your beautiful gift is on an all times high!!!! Amazing, just amazing Okay I'm cring!!!
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Date: 9/12/2015 6:30:00 PM
Well done, meaningful words.
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Date: 9/12/2015 2:45:00 PM
Swinging back with huge congratulations on a wonderful win! BRAVO fo this excellent piece! Pandita
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:44:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:28:00 AM
Eric,, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:14:00 AM
Oh man, I LOVE this! It gave me chills! I could never figure out how to turn an acrostic into something meaningful but you have done it here, Eric. Congratulations on your excellent win, Boo! xoxo
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Date: 9/9/2015 7:14:00 AM
Foudations of slavery continue......! Congrats Eric! Balveen
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Date: 9/9/2015 1:46:00 AM
Very wonderful write Eric n a superb win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:41:00 PM
Wish I had known if this contest
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:39:00 PM
Al the more reason to own your nation instead of your color alone. If Any other race were identified by their color instead of country - We would instead of Yellow Americans- Red Americans-White Americans. But we are the only ones called plain ole' Blacks.. We need to be identified as does the Irish American -Polish American _Chinese American And so on....
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Date: 8/20/2015 7:39:00 PM
An excellence write here, beautiful...........A.M.
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Date: 8/20/2015 3:00:00 PM
Hey Eric.. you made me feel how one Black must be treated. People are not defined by its color.. We are all human created by God ,no exceptions! You wrote a wonderful poem for us. Thanks for sharing your talent and for fighting amongst Black generations! ^_^
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:43:00 AM
This poem has a message and delivers it well. Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your humanity and vulnerabilities. Emile.
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:00:00 AM
A very good piece, Eric. Its rawness makes it even more sensational. All the best in the contest. hugs
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Date: 8/20/2015 10:47:00 AM
Eric, in this excellent work, you skillfully articulated the impact of discrimination, hatred, and hurt - all in one powerful package! I expect to see it high on the winners list! A - 7! Your friend, Pandita.
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Date: 8/20/2015 10:19:00 AM
Eric, I am reading this once more, it makes me so sad that people are made to suffer so, the pain drips from every word . . . and thanks for visiting my poem, love hurts
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Date: 8/17/2015 8:22:00 AM
Eric, like all the other comments I will add another POWERFUL A7 and thanks for visiting my innocent poem, it is finished now
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:22:00 AM
Hi Eric...here written in red...are the traces of hatred...in black ink we've bled...to demolish prejudice without - once read *******(:heers, Tbang
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Date: 8/17/2015 1:41:00 AM
Powerful well constructed piece, you penned this great and excellence............A.M.
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:57:00 PM
Powerfully penned "7". Good luck to you!!!
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Date: 8/16/2015 7:10:00 PM
Wonderful write a 7 and a winner in my eyes. Hugs dear friend
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Date: 8/16/2015 1:41:00 PM
Dear Eric, A powerfully penned historical black tragedy..... a 7!! All the best for contest...I condemn discrimination of all sorts...let the just and fair prevail!!!.....love, Anu:-)
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