Tragedy

You are my unquenched thirst,
that can be fulfilled with love.
You're like a shooting star,
That meteors burst. 

You weren't supposed to mean this much to me,
and I wasn't supposed to fall in love.
But, I don't wanna let go of this feeling now,
as it's a blessing from Above. 

It wasn't with knives you tore my heart,
but with words.
And only if I could tell you,
how much that hurts. 

But you're going to a distant land,
beyond my reach.
for now, I'm done with life,
and with everything it had to teach. 
                                                                  -Keyur Rawal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 5:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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June 4, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Keyur, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Rawal Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Hi. Thanks for such a warm welcome :)
A   Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Keyur,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Rawal Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Hey there. It feels amazing to be around with such great people. Thanks. :)
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