Constance La France Poet Acrostic

Tragedy

The passengers set sail in the sun
Roaming the decks and dining inside
And there was joy in every single heart 
Gliding out into the ocean and cold waters
Everything was new and never used before 
Doom embraced the ship when it hit an iceberg
Years ago, a catastrophe still heartbreaking to fathom

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September 7, 2021


Poetry/Acorstic/Tragedy
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1387-228-07
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France 


Written for the Standard contest, Message In An Acrostic 2
sponsor, Kim Rodrigues, Judged 09/17/2021

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Jack Horne September 27, 2021 at 5:07 AM love this thoughtful write on Titanic. Hope you & that cute kitty are doing well x Constance La France September 27, 2021 at 5:09 AM Jack, thank you for the compliment on my poem, yes me a kitty are fine ~peace and tranquility _Constance

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2021 at 5:29 AM I still think about the movie and the horror that the passengers and crew must have gone through in those last moments of the ship going down. We probably had all heard about it but the movie brought it to life. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thank you for stopping by my page with a comment. Sara Constance La France September 9, 2021 at 6:56 AM Sara, thanks for the visit to my poem, and for the compliment, appreciate. I will never forget that scene in the movie of the frozen bodies floating in the ocean and one a lady still holding her baby, we all have heard of the story of Titanic but most never let the horror in ~ love and serenity _Constance

Reason A. Poteet September 8, 2021 at 6:35 PM Tragedy remembered and recognized for the pain and suffering it caused...as we honor in a couple of days the tragedy of 9-11, 2001. Do we learn from the past? Well-done, Constance, best of luck in the finals. Constance La France September 8, 2021 at 9:54 PM Reason, thank you for visiting my poem, the comment and the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Edward Ibeh September 8, 2021 at 7:25 AM Wonderfully done and looks like a winner to me, Constance:-) Good luck in the contest! Constance La France September 8, 2021 at 3:16 PM Edward, thanks for the visit and compliment, well we never know for sure until the sponsor hits finalize but I hope so ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Harry Horsman September 8, 2021 at 6:22 AM Great poetry, Constance, clever last line, love it. Constance La France September 8, 2021 at 3:17 PM Harry thanks so much for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2021 at 10:00 PM I love how you did yours. It was so straighforward and easy to read. Great creative thinking, dear Heart. Constance La France September 8, 2021 at 3:18 PM Andrea, thank you for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Line Gauthier September 7, 2021 at 2:59 PM cool poem ~ neat form Constance La France September 8, 2021 at 3:18 PM Line, thanks so much for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2021 at 11:53 AM Hello Constance, yes it was a tragedy that happened. A horrible one. Love & Tranquillty Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2021 at 3:42 PM Hello Constance, you are welcome my friend. Love & Serenity Darlene Constance La France September 7, 2021 at 12:04 PM Darlene, thanks so much for the comment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Vijay Pandit September 7, 2021 at 11:46 AM So well written, Constance. I have read a few on this topic--your are the first with clarity of your message. Constance La France September 7, 2021 at 12:05 PM Vijay, thanks for the compliment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

L Milton Hankins September 7, 2021 at 10:46 AM Fine write clearlhy describing the message. Nice write, Constance. Best wishes in the contest. Constance La France September 7, 2021 at 12:06 PM Milt, thanks for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance