Trafficked

A consignment on foreign soil, arrogated from house and home Introduction in the blindness of night, freedom lost and spirit alone Evil now renders its hand, survival consumes the affected Divergent from fear and pain, escape becomes inspected October 12, 2020

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2020 11:51:00 AM

- Survival can be a struggle ... but often it's not about surviving ... it's about living ... - A great winning poem, congratulations Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/17/2020 2:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/16/2020 11:11:00 AM

Your vivid imagery and emotion depicts the plight of trafficked victims where the will to survive is severely tested. Potent poetry, Mark. Congratulations for your fine win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/16/2020 2:44:00 PM

Thanks Susan!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/15/2020 6:34:00 PM

Simple but powerful Mark. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/16/2020 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Linda!

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2020 12:48:00 PM

Trafficking is pure evil and so many lose the will to survive... Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/16/2020 7:35:00 AM

It's getting bad out there. Thank you for the placement!