Trading In Soups

~ See you soon, Soupers ~ 

For a couple of days
   I'm trading poetry soup in
for a piping-hot liquid broth
   with matso balls and chicken

   'Neath a bamboo-pole roof
in a flimsy dwelling seven days
   I'll see stars twinkling at night
be shielded from sun's rays

   With family, friends
the poor and the stranger
   We'll drink l'chaim, to life
trust in God to fend off danger

With songs, stories and verse
   we'll praise the One who provides
Who freed us from slavery, from Egypt
   and throughout Time's been our guide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Y. Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 10:08 PM
Hi Gershon, Enjoy your vacation. Have a good time with your family and friends:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Thanks, Alexis. I took your advice and have come back refreshed! :) gw
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October 15, 2019 at 4:18 PM
"Blessed are You, Lord our God, King of the universe Who chose us amongst nations, Who gave us a holy tongue Who sanctified us with His commandments and lovingly set forth joyous holy days such as this Succoth holiday".
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Whoa! You have quoted the liturgy precisely (at least in English). Impressive! Thanks for the support. In friendship, Gershon
Green Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Enjoy your holiday my friend, I really enjoyed your poem. Nice touch. : )
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:52 PM
Chris, appreciate your kind words, and the holiday's gone great so far... Warm wishes, Gershon
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October 15, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Gershon, Your poem 'Trading in soups' paints a lovely portrait. Enjoyed reading about this Season of our Rejoicing, 'Sukkot'. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Thank you so much, Richard! And the great thing about this Season of our Rejoicing is that it's real!! Warmest wishes, Gershon
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October 15, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Wonderful and I hope you have a wonderful time. Bless you, Gina
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Gina, thanks for your wishes for the holiday. Blessings, gw
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October 14, 2019 at 7:18 PM
Hello Gershon … good luck on your journey - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:45 PM
Thanks, Lindsay. So far, so good, my friend. Best wishes, gershon
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October 14, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Mmm...hope its nice and warm in your lovely hideaway! Be blessed!
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:43 PM
Well, it was cool 'weather-wise,' because the 'roof' is not closed off. There is space between the bamboo walls, and the walls are thin and uninsulated as well. But the warmth comes from the good holiday feelings, song, and sharing. Thank you so much, Kim!
Awtry Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Wishing you a blessed sukkot!
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:41 PM
Thank you so much for the good wishes! Happiness to you too! :) gw
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October 14, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Hi Gershon - quite an adventure you are planning - sounds fantastic - enjoy! Hugs and blessings, first and foremost! Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:40 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. 1st part of journey -- great. 2nd part coming next Sunday eve. Blessings, gw
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October 14, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Enjoy all thats coming your way, my friend...if you have time, check out puff puff part 2...my latest post...take care Gersh...^WW^ :o)
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:39 PM
OK, WW. I'm on my to Puff Puff part 2 right now. Thanks! :) gw
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October 13, 2019 at 9:03 PM
Enjoy your journey my friend....:) hugs
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:38 PM
So far, so good, Sandra. Thanks for your good wishes. Blessings, gw
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October 13, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Grace of journeys. See you soon.
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:38 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanne. The journey: so far, so good! (Now there are four intermediate days, during which I can eat Poetry Soup, after which two more days when I'll trade in soups again). :) gw
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