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Tracing Love's Caress

cocktail of gold stars

    melts on half-distilled kisses

           like grapes to wine’s mouths

      tracing each other’s faces

                   as night refills love’s caress

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2012 1:17:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 4/15/2012 5:03:00 PM Congrats on your 1st Place win, nette. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/15/2012 1:16:00 PM Hey there Nette, congratulations on your awesome win with this one in Russell's contest ;) *hugs* Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/15/2012 12:48:00 PM a steamy write from a steamy lady! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/15/2012 12:17:00 PM Can't get more romantic than this. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/15/2012 7:49:00 AM many congrats Nette luv on a wonderful first plafce win for this brilliant beauty write luv.. luv this kind of cocktail..mmmm.. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/15/2012 6:52:00 AM Congratulations on your super win nette xx Login to Reply

Sashi Prabhu Date: 4/15/2012 5:23:00 AM superb!!!! simply superb.........congrats Nette....................~sashi Login to Reply

Sashi Prabhu Date: 4/15/2012 5:08:00 AM superb!!!! simply superb.........congrats Nette....................~sashi Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/15/2012 4:38:00 AM Congratulations Nette!!! on your big win!! big hugs,love deb---well done... Login to Reply

Broken Butterfly Date: 4/13/2012 1:18:00 PM Hi nette, your poem is so pretty, awesome writing and best of luck in Russell's contest. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 4/13/2012 9:38:00 AM Romance and love reach to the boom and really night refills love's cares. Well done and best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/13/2012 6:29:00 AM VEry beautiful, Nette. I just loved that first line and how all the lines compared love to passions' drinks. Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 4/12/2012 7:44:00 AM Well, this one sure thing will be a winner. Very romantic and sensual, Nette. :) Login to Reply

Jancarl Campi Date: 4/11/2012 11:34:00 PM What a beautiful verse you penned here. Thanks for your comment on my "learned lady" Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/11/2012 11:27:00 AM You have an original unusual way of writing which is wonderful and unique Nette.. Lovely.. Charma Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 4/11/2012 10:29:00 AM highly romantical with enchanting imagery, love it, nette, jag Login to Reply

Deck Fitzgerald Date: 4/11/2012 9:47:00 AM Beautiful images conjured up Nette thanks for sharing , Best wishes , Declan xxx Login to Reply

Jared Pickett Date: 4/11/2012 8:37:00 AM Beautiful tale of love. I can feel the passion as I read and got all gooey inside!!! Good to see you again my friend.. Jared Pickett Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/11/2012 7:15:00 AM beautiful write indeed, nette. many congrats on your wins and thanks - loved your contest. will have to try writing some than bauk now Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/11/2012 5:55:00 AM Sweeeet.....cute and well done Nette. - luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/11/2012 5:46:00 AM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in Russell's contest..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/11/2012 5:03:00 AM oooooo...nice!!! I love the imagery...big huggsss,love deb (soupmail) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/11/2012 12:37:00 AM Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazinggggggg!!!!! Login to Reply

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 4/11/2012 12:34:00 AM very good wording.i love this one. Login to Reply

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