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Tracing Love's Caress

cocktail of gold stars melts on half-distilled kisses like grapes to wine’s mouths tracing each other’s faces as night refills love’s caress

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 1:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 4/15/2012 5:03:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st Place win, nette. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/15/2012 1:16:00 PM

Hey there Nette, congratulations on your awesome win with this one in Russell's contest ;) *hugs*

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/15/2012 12:48:00 PM

a steamy write from a steamy lady! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/15/2012 12:17:00 PM

Can't get more romantic than this. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2012 7:49:00 AM

many congrats Nette luv on a wonderful first plafce win for this brilliant beauty write luv.. luv this kind of cocktail..mmmm..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/15/2012 6:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win nette xx

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 4/15/2012 5:23:00 AM

superb!!!! simply superb.........congrats Nette....................~sashi

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 4/15/2012 5:08:00 AM

superb!!!! simply superb.........congrats Nette....................~sashi

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/15/2012 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations Nette!!! on your big win!! big hugs,love deb---well done...

Broken Butterfly

Date: 4/13/2012 1:18:00 PM

Hi nette, your poem is so pretty, awesome writing and best of luck in Russell's contest.

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/13/2012 9:38:00 AM

Romance and love reach to the boom and really night refills love's cares. Well done and best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2012 6:29:00 AM

VEry beautiful, Nette. I just loved that first line and how all the lines compared love to passions' drinks.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 4/12/2012 7:44:00 AM

Well, this one sure thing will be a winner. Very romantic and sensual, Nette. :)

Jancarl Campi

Date: 4/11/2012 11:34:00 PM

What a beautiful verse you penned here. Thanks for your comment on my "learned lady"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/11/2012 11:27:00 AM

You have an original unusual way of writing which is wonderful and unique Nette.. Lovely.. Charma

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/11/2012 10:29:00 AM

highly romantical with enchanting imagery, love it, nette, jag

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 4/11/2012 9:47:00 AM

Beautiful images conjured up Nette thanks for sharing , Best wishes , Declan xxx

Jared Pickett

Date: 4/11/2012 8:37:00 AM

Beautiful tale of love. I can feel the passion as I read and got all gooey inside!!! Good to see you again my friend.. Jared Pickett

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2012 7:15:00 AM

beautiful write indeed, nette. many congrats on your wins and thanks - loved your contest. will have to try writing some than bauk now

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2012 5:55:00 AM

Sweeeet.....cute and well done Nette. - luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2012 5:46:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in Russell's contest..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/11/2012 5:03:00 AM

oooooo...nice!!! I love the imagery...big huggsss,love deb (soupmail)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/11/2012 12:37:00 AM

Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazinggggggg!!!!!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/11/2012 12:34:00 AM

very good wording.i love this one.