Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

Tracing Love's Caress

cocktail of gold stars

    melts on half-distilled kisses

           like grapes to wine’s mouths

      tracing each other’s faces

                   as night refills love’s caress

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 1:17 PM Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor April 15, 2012 at 5:03 PM Congrats on your 1st Place win, nette. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Wilma Neels April 15, 2012 at 1:16 PM Hey there Nette, congratulations on your awesome win with this one in Russell's contest ;) *hugs*

Debbie Guzzi April 15, 2012 at 12:48 PM a steamy write from a steamy lady! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

Joyce Johnson April 15, 2012 at 12:17 PM Can't get more romantic than this. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2012 at 7:49 AM many congrats Nette luv on a wonderful first plafce win for this brilliant beauty write luv.. luv this kind of cocktail..mmmm..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 15, 2012 at 6:52 AM Congratulations on your super win nette xx

Sashi Prabhu April 15, 2012 at 5:23 AM superb!!!! simply superb.........congrats Nette....................~sashi

Sashi Prabhu April 15, 2012 at 5:08 AM superb!!!! simply superb.........congrats Nette....................~sashi

Deborah Burch April 15, 2012 at 4:38 AM Congratulations Nette!!! on your big win!! big hugs,love deb---well done...

Broken Butterfly April 13, 2012 at 1:18 PM Hi nette, your poem is so pretty, awesome writing and best of luck in Russell's contest.

Bl Devnath April 13, 2012 at 9:38 AM Romance and love reach to the boom and really night refills love's cares. Well done and best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2012 at 6:29 AM VEry beautiful, Nette. I just loved that first line and how all the lines compared love to passions' drinks.

Dinda Minardi April 12, 2012 at 7:44 AM Well, this one sure thing will be a winner. Very romantic and sensual, Nette. :)

Jancarl Campi April 11, 2012 at 11:34 PM What a beautiful verse you penned here. Thanks for your comment on my "learned lady"

Charmaine Chircop April 11, 2012 at 11:27 AM You have an original unusual way of writing which is wonderful and unique Nette.. Lovely.. Charma

S.Jagathsimhan Nair April 11, 2012 at 10:29 AM highly romantical with enchanting imagery, love it, nette, jag

Deck Fitzgerald April 11, 2012 at 9:47 AM Beautiful images conjured up Nette thanks for sharing , Best wishes , Declan xxx

Jared Pickett April 11, 2012 at 8:37 AM Beautiful tale of love. I can feel the passion as I read and got all gooey inside!!! Good to see you again my friend.. Jared Pickett

Jack Horne April 11, 2012 at 7:15 AM beautiful write indeed, nette. many congrats on your wins and thanks - loved your contest. will have to try writing some than bauk now

Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2012 at 5:55 AM Sweeeet.....cute and well done Nette. - luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise

Sara Kendrick April 11, 2012 at 5:46 AM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in Russell's contest..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Deborah Burch April 11, 2012 at 5:03 AM oooooo...nice!!! I love the imagery...big huggsss,love deb (soupmail)

Kash Poet April 11, 2012 at 12:37 AM Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazinggggggg!!!!!

Kash Poet April 11, 2012 at 12:34 AM Yeahhhh!!!

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