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Trace of Sunday's Joy

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Daylight wakes in grace to embrace Sunday’s rest And warms a hearth’s nest its trace of joy , mid-air: Lively the fond chime, mime, where playtime brings zest Till evening’s affair ...ends with kin's deep prayer. -------------------- Rhyme Battle: Happiness: Round 8 Contest Sponsored by Juli-Michelle 8/14/2017

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/7/2017 1:27:00 AM

Joyful and happy - love it, Nette! Congrats on another win, my friend! :-) <3

Shirley Rebstock

Date: 10/5/2017 7:56:00 AM

lovely poem on happiness.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 10/4/2017 8:41:00 PM

Filled with joy in every vivid word. Congratulations.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/4/2017 4:49:00 PM

Congratulations Nette :)

Constance La France

Date: 10/4/2017 2:08:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win !

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/4/2017 1:29:00 PM

Nette, this poem was very happy. Such a lovely write, and definitely deserved the placement in my contest. I'm sorry it took so long to get to! Congrats, Love, Juli-Michelle

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/22/2017 9:57:00 AM

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/16/2017 12:53:00 AM

Christians love Sunday, Jews Saturday, Muslims Friday, because that's Sabbath to them, the seventh day and is the day of rest. I love everyday of the week because I'm retired.......

Becca Teagan

Date: 8/14/2017 8:57:00 AM

Very beautifully penned, Nette!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/14/2017 7:28:00 AM

What a joyous write. I enjoyed the read of this gem. Thanks for sharing.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2017 4:28:00 AM

What a powerful and intriguing write my friend! Such a delightful and exceedingly wondrous poem Nette! I really loved reading this fascinating piece this morning! You have impressed me by your wondrous rhyme, every time! Great Work!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/13/2017 8:32:00 PM

Wonderful, I really liked the last line as we can be full of laughter and smiles and still be able to see the serious side of life as well! :) hugs!