Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

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Trace of Sunday's Joy

Daylight wakes in grace to embrace  Sunday’s rest

And warms a hearth’s nest its trace of joy , mid-air:

Lively the fond chime, mime, where playtime brings zest

Till evening’s affair ...ends with kin's deep prayer.



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Rhyme Battle: Happiness: Round 8 Contest 
Sponsored by Juli-Michelle    8/14/2017

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Gregory Richard Barden October 7, 2017 at 1:27 AM Joyful and happy - love it, Nette! Congrats on another win, my friend! :-) <3

Shirley Rebstock October 5, 2017 at 7:56 AM lovely poem on happiness.

Janis Medders Tobechi October 4, 2017 at 8:41 PM Filled with joy in every vivid word. Congratulations.

Heidi Sands October 4, 2017 at 4:49 PM Congratulations Nette :)

Constance La France October 4, 2017 at 2:08 PM Nette, congratulations on your win !

Juli- Michelle October 4, 2017 at 1:29 PM Nette, this poem was very happy. Such a lovely write, and definitely deserved the placement in my contest. I'm sorry it took so long to get to! Congrats, Love, Juli-Michelle

Ronald A. Williams August 22, 2017 at 9:57 AM OK

Pashang Salehi August 16, 2017 at 12:53 AM Christians love Sunday, Jews Saturday, Muslims Friday, because that's Sabbath to them, the seventh day and is the day of rest. I love everyday of the week because I'm retired.......

Becca Teagan August 14, 2017 at 8:57 AM Very beautifully penned, Nette!

Afolabi Muideen August 14, 2017 at 7:28 AM What a joyous write. I enjoyed the read of this gem. Thanks for sharing.

Russell Sivey August 14, 2017 at 4:28 AM What a powerful and intriguing write my friend! Such a delightful and exceedingly wondrous poem Nette! I really loved reading this fascinating piece this morning! You have impressed me by your wondrous rhyme, every time! Great Work!!

Arthur Vaso August 13, 2017 at 8:32 PM Wonderful, I really liked the last line as we can be full of laughter and smiles and still be able to see the serious side of life as well! :) hugs!

Frederic Parker August 13, 2017 at 6:11 PM Joyous nette, simply joyous

Joseph May August 13, 2017 at 6:09 PM Joy awakens with zest...Wonderful write Nette..

Janis Medders Tobechi August 13, 2017 at 4:14 PM Sunday sounds like a fine day. Well written. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 2:51 PM - Lovely written, Nette - Luck in the contest - Sunday’s hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper August 13, 2017 at 2:35 PM Nicely done, Nette, soup mail ~*

Heidi Sands August 13, 2017 at 1:00 PM This is beautifully written Nette. Your words are smoothly read and it feels like a peaceful Sunday :)

Vijay Pandit August 13, 2017 at 12:53 PM Sunday's joy delightfully expressed--quite a poetic rhythm--well done nette--good luck for the contest.