Toys and Steam a Lovers Dream

Gyrating naked body flesh
Grinding thumping boobs and butts press
"Toys" part of this wild scene
Chains and whips  being mean
For battle wounds hidden not seen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 9:05 PM
congrats on a great win, Robin my funny friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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July 8, 2014 at 11:44 PM
Robin, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 4:11 PM
Congrats in the contest, my friend.Hey, where have you been lately? I should go see if you have a new poem posted!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Great witty one Robin! Congrats on big win!
Mehta Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Interesting and funny write, robin. congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 4:58 PM
ohh err Robin i can see why Roy liked this one Lol a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan xxx
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 1:38 AM
I must say that from the title I was expecting something quite different. What an interesting surprise. I'm smiling am I meant to be?
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 12:37 AM
hmmm, it sounds like they are in an orgy. Very different kind of poem from you, Robin. What made you think of this? It reminds me of that one Tom Cruise movie I saw years ago, but now the name escapes me. (open your eyes? something like that)
Dunn Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Interesting work here, thank you for sharing and for your comments on my poem, cheri
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 5:52 AM
passionate work..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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