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Toyland Battles

The child, now sleeping, loudly snores. The nightlight shines there on the wall. If you could peer under the door, The sight awaiting would enthrall: It seems the toys have come to life! They are engaged in no mere game: A toyland battle to the death! The superheroes are to blame; The men in green have few troops left; Their losses heavy in the strife. With Duplo blocks, they barricade, Regroup their forces there behind. They inventory their grenades, Make mental notes of where they've mined, Prepare to meet their tragic end. Magneto rises from the floor, Unleashes his attractive beam; The troops let out a racous roar, for they are plastic, it would seem, thus to his will they do not bend. A team dispatched to try and flank, To scale the chair, come from the back. But Hulk awaits them like a tank, Behind a pillow, sneak attack. The spear is blunted, further thinned. The captain, knowing things are dire, Determines he will save the men, and laying bare some lamp cord wire, he challenges Magneto then; His sergeant understands and grins. Magnetic forces back in play, the soldier runs, flips the switches. The predator becomes the prey; Magneto, arcing current, twitches: a turning point in this grim war. The flash of light wakes up the child; she bolts up, eyes now open wide. The spell is broken; meek and mild, the toys, inert, lay side by side. Her head back down, again she snores. ---------- So that's an ABABC DEDEC tail-rhyme, and kind of a fun one!

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Date: 4/10/2022 4:05:00 PM
oh wait, now I see something different. The last lines only rhyme twice and then you change to a new rhyme. let me check out your other example of that.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/16/2022 10:49:00 AM
ok good to know we can be creative then. And it looks like near rhymes are also acceptable but usually I avoid that anyway!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/10/2022 4:16:00 PM
Son of Amittai is quite complex - the tail rhyme lines of the first 12 stanzas themselves have aaadbbbdcccd.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/10/2022 4:11:00 PM
Yeah, it is still considered a tail-rhyme - the tail just doens't rhyme with anything in the stanza. I've done them with entire poems, every two stanzas, every three. I think there's a lot of room for creativity there.
Date: 4/10/2022 4:04:00 PM
oh wow, this is the perfect example of the abab scheme with also doing the last line to rhyme with other stanzas' last lines. Thanks for directing us to your examples. Now I feel like I really get it. CUTE tall tale.
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Date: 4/8/2022 1:19:00 PM
Your end rhymes are marvelously penned!
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Date: 4/6/2022 8:49:00 PM
Epic! Simply Epic, Jeff FAVE-time for me. Bravo, Poet! :) Gershon
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/7/2022 3:40:00 AM
Thanks, this was a fun one!

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