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Acrostic Agility Poetry Contest

Third Place

Triviality concentrated static Overture to a long trending collaboration Yare are the toys in the attic

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/7/2025 5:07:00 PM

Anaya, toys can be quite the thing. I remember always wanting toys when I was young. Now, we supply them to others. Of course, the attic could be our brain....these short poems leave a lot of room for interpretation. I'm loving it and sending you smiles.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 5/4/2025 10:47:00 PM

yare! pink isn't it? Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/4/2025 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "TOY" write. Few words with much said. The attic can be a great place for old toys. What a doll picture you have here. Have a Blessed Day with your Win.......

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/4/2025 4:49:00 PM

TY Paula. Can you guess who she is?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2025 10:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Acrostic poem "Toy " in the contest, Anaya :) - hugs

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/4/2025 4:48:00 PM

A fun contest, Anne TY!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/3/2025 6:04:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win, dear Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/4/2025 7:45:00 AM

Ty for your return and congratulating me on my win, I'm so pleased!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2025 11:52:00 AM

A well-crafted acrostic poem, dear Anaya. You explored themes of nostalgia, passage of time, and juxtaposition of simplicity with complexity. The "toys in the attic" represent childhood innocence and the trivial aspects of life that may seem insignificant but hold deeper meanings over time. Best wishes for the contest.

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/1/2025 5:00:00 PM

I love the anology best, SP. The static that over rides the natural process of thought , makes collective symphonies over time, of conjestion, yet lively are the childhood memories~ ty