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Acrostic Agility Poetry Contest

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Contest Winner MedalThird Place

Triviality concentrated static Overture to a long trending collaboration Yare are the toys in the attic

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Date: 5/4/2025 10:47:00 PM
yare! pink isn't it? Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 5/4/2025 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "TOY" write. Few words with much said. The attic can be a great place for old toys. What a doll picture you have here. Have a Blessed Day with your Win.......
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/4/2025 4:49:00 PM
TY Paula. Can you guess who she is?
Date: 5/4/2025 10:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Acrostic poem "Toy " in the contest, Anaya :) - hugs
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/4/2025 4:48:00 PM
A fun contest, Anne TY!
Date: 5/3/2025 6:04:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win, dear Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/4/2025 7:45:00 AM
Ty for your return and congratulating me on my win, I'm so pleased!
Date: 5/1/2025 11:52:00 AM
A well-crafted acrostic poem, dear Anaya. You explored themes of nostalgia, passage of time, and juxtaposition of simplicity with complexity. The "toys in the attic" represent childhood innocence and the trivial aspects of life that may seem insignificant but hold deeper meanings over time. Best wishes for the contest.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/1/2025 5:00:00 PM
I love the anology best, SP. The static that over rides the natural process of thought , makes collective symphonies over time, of conjestion, yet lively are the childhood memories~ ty
Date: 5/1/2025 10:00:00 AM
Nice one.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/1/2025 1:51:00 PM
Ty Jay, I'm so glad you enjoyed ~
Date: 5/1/2025 5:48:00 AM
GAAA! It's Winona Ryder shrunk to doll size. Now that's scary. As far as y are the toys in the attic, Aerosmith had a take on that
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/1/2025 8:12:00 AM
Oh shoot! I wanted this to be a guessing game. Perfect for the part, just enough spooky as are the toys in the attic and mind gone.
Date: 4/30/2025 6:08:00 PM
That doll seems terrifying!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/1/2025 8:19:00 AM
This one has a greater sense of lunacy charm, and an illusion of a shrunken human doll. And all can guess who she is. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2025 7:47:00 PM
Don’t get me wrong…I still liked it. lol. Love your use of “Yare” All very good! Best wishes for contest!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/30/2025 6:47:00 PM
I had this one tucked away ~
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/30/2025 6:09:00 PM
Lol. I should probably scrap it.

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