Beata Agustin Poet Senryu

Toxins Out

flushing toxins out
excretory system works
thank God*, I'm relieved

*1 Thessalonians 5:18 In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you.

October 2, 2023 
1st place, "A HI-POO SENRYU" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by John lawless; judged on 10/30/2023

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Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2023 at 2:06 PM Way to go. Congrats, Beata.

Linda Alice Fowler October 30, 2023 at 1:48 PM LOL. This is very clever dear Beata. Congratulations! :)

James Edward Lee Sr. October 30, 2023 at 9:11 AM Freed from my toxins watsed out whew! nothing left but to be wiped off Congrats on your win, Beata ; )

Terry Miller October 30, 2023 at 9:01 AM Great Senryu; congratulations

Jan Allison October 30, 2023 at 7:58 AM lol good one Beata:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Bj Legros Kelley October 18, 2023 at 2:09 PM Lol, we may thank Him for everything!! :)

Michael Maul October 2, 2023 at 7:56 AM Truer words never spoken