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flushing toxins out excretory system works thank God*, I'm relieved
*1 Thessalonians 5:18 In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you. October 2, 2023 1st place, "A HI-POO SENRYU" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by John lawless; judged on 10/30/2023

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Date: 10/31/2023 2:06:00 PM
Way to go. Congrats, Beata.
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Date: 10/30/2023 1:48:00 PM
LOL. This is very clever dear Beata. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/30/2023 9:11:00 AM
Freed from my toxins watsed out whew! nothing left but to be wiped off Congrats on your win, Beata ; )
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Date: 10/30/2023 9:01:00 AM
Great Senryu; congratulations
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Date: 10/30/2023 7:58:00 AM
lol good one Beata:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/18/2023 2:09:00 PM
Lol, we may thank Him for everything!! :)
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:56:00 AM
Truer words never spoken
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:52:00 AM
Haha I was too shy not to write CONTEST ENTRY all over mine :) great entry x
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:30:00 AM
This might be in the TMI category but okay. Glad your load has been lightened
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