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Toxic State

TOXIC STATE within his eyes darkness falls screaming in the dark tragedy with blush ugliness of a shriveled rose love’s red apple lips jaded beyond recognition moonlight madness unstoppable rusty gate dangling branch macabre 6/7/2017 Best Titles Poetry Contest
1st Place

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Date: 6/20/2017 4:54:00 AM
Deep, dark and yet so beautiful. Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Date: 6/19/2017 10:40:00 PM
Wow, you went dark with yours Kim. This is exceptional! Congratulations on your top win. : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2017 10:58:00 PM
Thanks, Connie!
Date: 6/19/2017 4:07:00 PM
I recognise some of the titles from contests. I Love the way you wove them into such a dark poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2017 6:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan!
Date: 6/7/2017 9:32:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem all by itself.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thanks, Dale!
Date: 6/7/2017 6:34:00 AM
Hi Kim ,great write , best wishes for contest:))))hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2017 6:41:00 AM
Thank you, Niall!
Date: 6/7/2017 6:27:00 AM
Wow, this was really cool Kim. What a great entry for the contest. Best wishes my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2017 6:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris!
Date: 6/7/2017 5:19:00 AM
- Dark, but well done Kim - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2017 6:03:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Date: 6/7/2017 3:13:00 AM
That is so good Kim, I am awed :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2017 6:04:00 AM
Thanks, Darren!
Date: 6/7/2017 1:05:00 AM
It's a real tough one this! You did very well, Kim! Best of luck to you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2017 6:06:00 AM
Thank you, White Wolf :)

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