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Toxic State

I bent the universe I bent the universe back and forth rapidly until it cracked and still couldn’t fit through to the future or the past Written for the Toxic State contest Sponsored by FJ Thomas

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/25/2016 10:00:00 AM

Infinite and awesome. Congratulations, Kai

Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thanks so very much Kai.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/24/2016 6:32:00 AM

Wow, Chris! Says a lot in a few words! Congrats!

Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thanks so very much Kim. I am glad you liked it.

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/23/2016 2:19:00 PM

Chris, perhaps a somewhat different tack for you, but another piece of your genius revealed. Bending the universe back and forth: I am jealous. : )

Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thanks so very much Doug. Sometimes I step out of that romantic box.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/5/2016 5:18:00 PM

Cool existential poem, Chris. Depth of thought/simplicity of expression. A powerful combo for sure. Love this poem. Joy and peace and love always.

Chris Green
Date: 12/5/2016 5:19:00 PM

Thanks again my friend. Just stepping out of the box a little for me.

Darren White

Date: 12/3/2016 4:22:00 AM

Oh, I love this little poem so much! It's wonderful... Good luck in the contest :)

Darren White
Date: 12/23/2016 1:12:00 PM

Coming back to you with congratulations :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/5/2016 8:34:00 AM

Thanks so much Darren, I am thrilled you liked it.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/2/2016 5:55:00 PM

Just fit in the present...Love the thought you provoked with these few lines Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 6:03:00 PM

I do my best. :) Thank you Charmaine, just trying to write one to fit the contest theme.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/2/2016 2:43:00 PM

Amazing write! Well done :) :) Good luck in the contest

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 3:07:00 PM

Thanks so very much my sweet friend.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/2/2016 2:08:00 PM

Wow, Chris...so much said in so few words to stir the imagination of such profound unknowns. Love it, and best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 2:18:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sandra for your always kind words to me. I am happy you liked this one.

Becca Teagan

Date: 12/2/2016 1:48:00 PM

This is so creative! I love this :) oh wow I think I say "I love this" on every single one of your poems lol I need to come up with something different!!

Becca Teagan
Date: 12/2/2016 5:04:00 PM

;)

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 2:18:00 PM

Don't change it on my account, I love it. :) Thanks so very much my friend.