Town Visitor-Contest

These here trails are long and wide; I've 
ridden them for years.
I gave up the outlaw ways some time ago
and faced my fears.

I'm a visitor in this town; folks are giving
me the evil eye,
Riding on my horse with a gun at my side I
feel danger’s nigh.

Though I haven't had to draw my gun in 
a very long while,
I've never backed down from any fight
that ain't my style.

But I won't be here much longer; I'm 
just passing through,
However, if someone challenges me
they'll be sad they drew.

In the corner of my eye, I see some-
one walking my way,
I don't want to wound a man today or
have him be prey.

I slowed down my horse and greeted
him with a nod,
He drew his gun and pulled his trigger 
but missed, I was awed.

I jumped off my horse, grabbed my gun
and shot him dead,
He didn't have a chance to shoot back
he fell like lead.

Mounted my trusted friend and left that
ghost of a town,
It seemed odd that the onlookers were
no longer around.

I didn't want to relive my gun fighting 
days but I'm no coward,
That day, I put my old life behind me
and it's happy trails onward.






*I haven't a clue if this is correct, but I decided to
give it a go.

01/20/2021
Contest: Cowboy
Sponsor: Line Gauthier






Sponsored by Line Gauthier.
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Fenn Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 9:40 PM
Neat poem Alexis! You made it easy to picture what was happening in this poem story.
Cunningham Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Back with congrats Alexis, have a lovely weekend. Tom
May Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 5:29 PM
Very nicely told story Alexis, Congrats on your win..
Hinshaw Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest, Alexis. Well-deserved. I enjoyed your western tale so much! Thanks for your kind comments re my win. Bob
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Great effort Alexis. I think it's just dandy! Congratulations on the HM! Linda
Goldsmith Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful cowboy story/write. Yes, "happy trails onward." Enjoy your win/day with blessings.................
Proxenos Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Wow I thought I was watching a cowboy movie or part of a series, I think it's a winner, so well penned Alexis. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 12:34 PM
this is very good work, Alexis!! I hope I can come up with one as good as yours!
Pandit Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Your cowboy story rides brilliantly, Alexis. Reminded me of scenes from some old movies. All the best.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Love it. Best wishes in the contest. Love to you and God bless you too
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 2:17 AM
- A Cowboy is never a coward ... love your story, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 11:07 PM
Seems like you entered a ghost town with ghost all around. A great cowboy tale. Best for a win. ~~
Buehler Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:56 PM
This is awesome, Alexis! It's very interesting and well rhymed and the language is authentic. It's a Fave. Best wishes for the contest. :=)
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 10:05 PM
Hi Evelyn, Thank you so much for such a kind review; I appreciate the fav and the visit:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:48 PM
Super-duper cowboy story, Alexis. This is headed for a win in the contest, because the story line grips the reader and there's an internal as well as external conflict going on. ~ Old Hoss
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 10:02 PM
Hi Gershon, Thank you so much for such a wonderful review. I appreciate your support:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Loved it Alexis, the old west facinates me, I've read hundreds of books. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 10:01 PM
Hi Tom, Thank you so much. My dad loved cowboys and western movies;I love them too because of my dad. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
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January 20, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Absolutely correct Alexis, it's a wonderful Cowboy story/poem, a good contender for the contest... Belle :-)
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 9:58 PM
Hi Belle, Thank you so much. I appreciate your support. Thanks for being the first one to comment on this write:-) Alexis
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