Town Hall Lemmings

The town hall clock chimed twelve
And the crowds they were  a' swelling,
A vision came into my mind
They reminded me of lemmings.

Of course there was no waiting cliff
No fabled deadly leaping,
Just an endless tidal flow
Onwards, ever creeping.

Each it seemed held a phone
'Twas quite a sight to see,
No colliding nor incidents
It was choreography!

We have evolved a sense
So we need not lift our heads,
We just switch to autopilot
Then chat and text instead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Lines of sweetness, thoughts of goodness, a complete piece, wonderful craft.
Smith Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 12:05 PM
Thank you Funom. :)
DiMino Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Great poem! Amazing how technology has taken the living place.
Smith Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Thank you Joe. :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 12:04 PM
We all look down now, not at each other at all. You have expressed this sad truth well Gary. "we need not lift our heads," So appropriate for today's youth and we older ones too.
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Caren. :)
Awtry Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 10:57 AM
the truth is stranger than fiction! Did any Sci-Fi writers of the 80's predict this? Enjoyed your write !
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Thank you P.S. :)
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