Town Children

They sit on splintered stoops
sun setting in the hazy dust
coated with the days play
drooping daisies awaiting a breeze.


©9/11/2019

Town Children Poetry Contest
Julia Ward - sponsor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 12:21 PM
You have captivated me with this piece, my best to you in the contest. A fave :) xomo
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September 12, 2019 at 7:13 AM
I am going to have to find that.
Lawless Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 5:55 PM
alas, Mo, the idea of having you as a captive conjures up memories of "The Ransom of Red Chief", a short story I read many years ago.....quite amusing.
Wanter Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 10:29 AM
I like this look at Town Children. Good luck in your contest.
Lawless Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 5:56 PM
oh yeah, a distant time devoid of the aura of "blue" light
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