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Joseph May's Choose a Line Contest...posted 18 May 25

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when elixir of moon drips wine into the crystal goblet of magic this late night beguiles my skin, reeling on a Friday parade of lights; my hips oh so beckon, swaggering to and fro... impossible to deny this playgroud of fancy of a soul flitting in. and out of supple thoughts when my imagination dangles on anklets of stars as naked rhythm grows, my free will abides to sip the juice of this wondrous ambrosia... and goddess Isis wheels into the forest with neon banners, spinning dream--like fables in my heart tingling flesh against trickles of time, where seahorses ride on carousels where ' a crimson sky breaks the distant shore' and vivid thoughts spill like silver rain: in a tower of daydreams or night walks, visions are spun without question.

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Date: 5/23/2025 9:27:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your wonderful "Tower Of Magic" write again. Have a blessed day with your win..............
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Date: 5/22/2025 3:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win Nette, Very nicely done
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Date: 5/21/2025 6:12:00 AM
Dear Nette, Your poem is a lush, sensual reverie that pulses with enchantment and divine feminine energy. From the moment “the elixir of moon drips wine” into that “crystal goblet of magic,” I was swept into a world where rhythm, mysticism, and desire merge in dazzling harmony. Your imagery is rich and evocative—“anklets of stars,” “seahorses on carousels,” “goddess Isis with neon banners”—each line painting a dreamscape both vivid and spellbinding. There's a wild freedom in your words, a celebration of imagination unbound and spirit unleashed. Reading this felt like sipping ambrosia under moonlight—intoxicating, ethereal, and wholly unforgettable.
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Date: 5/20/2025 12:02:00 PM
Beautifully and uniquely filled with Nette-imagery and metaphors that gift the reader's soul with a trip thru 'otherness'. 2nd stanza, 2nd line, 'an' is calling for her d-mate. Loved this ... CayCay
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Date: 5/20/2025 5:38:00 AM
Dear Nette, pure enchantment with moonlit magic and wild imagination. I’m swept away by your lush imagery: anklets of stars, neon banners, seahorses on carousels. You capture the freedom and allure of night’s playground, where dreams and rhythms entwine. Oh this was an intoxicating journey and your words are an elixir to sip from wonder’s crystal goblet. Spring Blessings, My Dear Nette, Daniel
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Date: 5/19/2025 5:18:00 PM
beautiful images and music, an enchanting poem dear poet, enjoyed your creativity
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Date: 5/19/2025 4:51:00 PM
Nette.. Your beautiful and mysterious write is intoxicating and highly emotive, tapping into something primal and dreamlike. I’m in a glorious and mystical fog of not completely grasping the full context, which is actually part of your artist allure. I taste a sensual, euphoric state.. coming in and out of a dream-like state? It feels like a spiritual high mixed with intimate energy.. what amazing twins! This reading was an exciting and exhausting journey.. why am I flush and sweating :) I sent you a Soupie
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Date: 5/18/2025 12:47:00 PM
What a wonderful "Tower Of Magic" write. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away..................
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Date: 5/18/2025 9:20:00 AM
Gorgeous writing, it enchants
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