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Towards Dawn Towards Light

Amid rumbling of its unrighteous song An inkling of that something is wrong Terrifies me,as my eyes prolong For I have a deeper insight Towards dawn,towards light When the darkness of the night reigns Dwindling light of hope it deigns Asleep and calm the vigil feigns I haste to make it,I hope I might Towards dawn,towards light Not that the night or the moon I curse For indeed it does rejuvenate and nurse My only reason behind yearning that occurs Is to see the new sun,reach a new height Towards dawn,towards light

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/9/2024 2:33:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 12:18:00 AM

m a d, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/22/2015 7:38:00 PM

HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK AGAIN.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/15/2015 12:14:00 PM

Hi Mozi, this is such an excellent piece that makes me look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2015 12:03:00 PM

Hi Mozi, I like the repeated line "Towards dawn, towards light," Much faith looking forward to a new day. WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

DM Babbit

Date: 11/12/2015 11:57:00 AM

Seems we are always waiting for the dawn and the light. Nicely written. Welcome. DMB

Skat A

Date: 11/12/2015 11:23:00 AM

Moiz, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moiz Aziz Dungrawala
Date: 11/12/2015 11:30:00 AM

Hello skat..i read your poems..diligence!!